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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 10:32:00 PM

    A wonderful write Catie I read this one last night and thought I left a comment but I checked I dont think I did, its so lovely to read you again and be back I am thoroughly enjoying it love Jayne x

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:44:00 PM

    Catie, Stunning writing talent. The words twist and turn through metaphores of silver and gold. Very high quality. Love it

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 9:33:00 AM

    Overused and trite expressions can never adequately express my feelings about this magnificent post. I must once again search for new praise..... Love you dearly..... Jake

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:07:00 AM

    Mercury as a poison with many interpretations; it could be pain, sickness, regrets ... Excellent! You're a wonderful writer, dear Catie. Im going to fav this one! : )

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:12:00 AM

    Fourth verse, last three lines - AWESOME!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:40:00 AM

    thank u and this poem you wrote makes me want to write more

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:19:00 AM

    Another Brilliant Write...My Vocabulary is limited with words to express how great this is...but my heart spills over with admiration. Thank you for your friendship....and the classy way you show your friends your my BLOG The other day...filled my my heart with love and appreciation.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:08:00 AM

    P.S. .....Manner *winkers*

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:07:00 AM

    This was an awesome forum for you to spill in this manner.<--Look that word up on: Microsoft works word processor. Well, write it on microsoft work page and hit tools, then dictionary. Sorry my friend; I just do not know if many souls use microsoft works. To me, it is a God send ! Once again dear poet, great write and have a brilliant week....much love, james

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:21:00 PM

    Catie, I was attracted, at first, by your beautiful avatar on the home page. It made me think of the 60's. This revelation is very sad. I can only hope that the realization that has come to you and the expression of it may lead to something better. That is my hope. l had high hopes for the world in the 60's. But human nature did not change, and I think our society has a generous helping of selfishness. This is a beautiful poem in its own right. I wish you well and thank-you for this.