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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 10:32:00 PM
    A wonderful write Catie I read this one last night and thought I left a comment but I checked I dont think I did, its so lovely to read you again and be back I am thoroughly enjoying it love Jayne x

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Catie, Stunning writing talent. The words twist and turn through metaphores of silver and gold. Very high quality. Love it

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 9:33:00 AM
    Overused and trite expressions can never adequately express my feelings about this magnificent post. I must once again search for new praise..... Love you dearly..... Jake

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Mercury as a poison with many interpretations; it could be pain, sickness, regrets ... Excellent! You're a wonderful writer, dear Catie. Im going to fav this one! : )

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Fourth verse, last three lines - AWESOME!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:40:00 AM
    thank u and this poem you wrote makes me want to write more

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:08:00 AM
    P.S. .....Manner *winkers*

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:07:00 AM
    This was an awesome forum for you to spill in this manner.<--Look that word up on: Microsoft works word processor. Well, write it on microsoft work page and hit tools, then dictionary. Sorry my friend; I just do not know if many souls use microsoft works. To me, it is a God send ! Once again dear poet, great write and have a brilliant week....much love, james

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Catie, I was attracted, at first, by your beautiful avatar on the home page. It made me think of the 60's. This revelation is very sad. I can only hope that the realization that has come to you and the expression of it may lead to something better. That is my hope. l had high hopes for the world in the 60's. But human nature did not change, and I think our society has a generous helping of selfishness. This is a beautiful poem in its own right. I wish you well and thank-you for this.