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Haiku 19

Intense sensation,
the essence of an instant.
Into liquid bliss.

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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:07:00 PM

    Loved the last line, nice work.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/9/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading it, Raul. Jack
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:53:00 AM

    Jack. super...David

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/3/2013 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! I appreciate the comment. J
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:54:00 PM

    wow, what a great way to describe bliss.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/3/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good stuff, that bliss... J
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Lovely haiku, Jack. - Sending you some sunshine! Right now I am enjoying a warm and lovely spring sunshine in Turkey ..... GORGEOUS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/3/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoy your sunny trip! J
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work this morn..Your comment was uplifting..Sara

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/2/2013 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're welcome. I enjoyed reading your work. K
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Good morning Jack, great intense imagery... love the way it all dissolves... always~ LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/2/2013 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good Saturday to you as well. Thanks for the comment and the visit. j