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Squeaky Wheel

There was a wheel that squeaked Not a sound in the world like it My senses were surely peaked Drove me crazy, gave me a fit The air in the tires leaked No piece of it worked, not a bit The whole bike when moved creaked I could do nothing but come sit Sound of the wheel sure freaked So I got off my bike and quit
Entrant into Suzette Crous's "A GROOK FOR ALL OCCASIONS" contest 3/2/2013

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 6:36:00 AM

    Loved your winning poem Russell...congratulations.. Donna

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Russell , Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 11:47:00 AM

    Loved this the first time I read it...Many congratulations my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Congratulations, Russell, this shows the unseen side of your brain...not dark, just different.

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 1:54:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 1:00:00 PM

    Wonderful and Awesome piece,Russel...Well written...Congrats on your superb win....Kudos to you,pal..

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 10:58:00 AM

    Rather like my computer this morning. It doesn't even bother to squeak. Just sits there glued to one line. Great win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:02:00 AM

    many congrats with your winnig grook Russell xx

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:41:00 AM

    LOL. :) This is wonderful, charming and quirky. I like. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 6:08:00 AM

    I like your Russell..a very cool poem..really enjoyed this grook..you are one creative guy..

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:18:00 PM

    What a great poem for the contest! I enjoyed reading this tonight :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 1:15:00 PM

    Wise reaction my dear Russell. Why to suffer by riding something broken at the time something new is waiting for you? Brilliant metaphor! Enjoyed it! Thank you!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:31:00 AM

    Brilliantly creative write here for the contest Russell. Enjoyed your artistic words very much. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Enjoyed the fun very much Russell!!Very nice poem for the contest.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Thanks for the big smiles on this superbly fantastic write of yours my dear friend, Russell. I love it! This is such a brilliant idea and write about the theme of the contest. A winner for me! Good luck and best wishes always! thank you so much for sharing this excellent piece of yours! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:15:00 AM

    Lol, this poem is just too funny, Russell. Simple but hilarious :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 6:41:00 AM

    Nicely done Russell. Great rhyming. Best wishes in the Grook contest. Warm Smiles, Connie