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Duped

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Duped

Surreal beauty fit to fly.
Pearly teeth, oozing lies.

Dark mane casts ethereal frame.
Deep blue views of sinister flames.

Transient bodice, eager flight.
Others upon, she bestows the sight.

Lying beauty unadorned.
Dark addiction, newly horned.

Gentle hand, cloying chest.
Upon hole, within loss rest.

Flaying flesh from bone.
A dying wish of an inherent crone.

Hole, which inner heart was bore.
Afore gaucherie did so gore.
Lying inert and naked on the floor.


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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Hearts can easily be broken and very hard to put back together. Nice write on this subject.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Congrats Jacob on this winning piece...Donna

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Congrats, Jacob. Well done. Happy Easter. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:08:00 PM
    Jacob, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:09:00 PM
    enjoyed reading your poem you've got a way with words; wonderful!!!-Maddie

    Bellville Avatar Jacob Bellville
    Date: 3/15/2013 4:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the comment, I really appreciate it. -Jacob