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Her Love My Lover

Pitter patter falls the sound this rains
Lipstick traces, about her window pane..
Brushing beauty as that her canvas poetic
Of words like cleansing showers; caressing velvet
Heart's a colourful scene; she painting in dreams
Beyound the gray tasting their tender tips; dipped
Within vivid pools and her melting splendours...
Gathering vistas these ecstasies her, love; my lover.


                                                                   

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:32:00 AM

    Beautiful !!!!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:11:00 PM

    This is just so very beautiful xxxx

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:01:00 AM

    So romantic and sweet! A great write as always! Thank you so much my dear poet friend Rachel for sharing this and for your precious time reading my poem, leaving me an inspiring comment and favouring it is also my pleasure and an honor for me. Thank you so much for everything! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:36:00 PM

    Beautiful x thank you for your lovely visit

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:38:00 PM

    what a lovely verses... so beautifully written ...and so romantic to the readers's soul :) you have such a poetic soul my dearest Rachel :) <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:34:00 AM

    A beautiful picture painted with your words...Donna

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Always the sensual Romantic, thrilling her readers, melting hearts and raising flames! LOL! Well done, Rachel. Love, Annalise