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Haiku 18 - mirrored

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Haiku 18 - mirrored

Human tragedy, 
the color of hopeless mornings.
Sadness is constant.  
            •
Sadness is constant,  
a landscape of fear and fire.
Consummatum est.

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:55:00 PM
    enjoyed seeing this one as well, Creativity with the mirroring

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/3/2013 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It just seemed to be right, as things sometimes are. J
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Hello Jack, i'm impressed with the deep and sad imagery. the color of hopeless morning.. wow..wow..that line alone speaks for the entire haiku...xox~LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/2/2013 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I just read what I wrote earlier, and wondered why on earth I said what I said. Truth is that my dark comes and goes... and comes and goes. It winds up built into what I write, which is as it should be. J
    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/2/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. It's strange though that I seem to write dark pieces when I'm not the least bit dark personally. Oh well... J
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Very impressive Haikus on a burning topic. Thanks for appreciating my Tanka Garden's Glamour, Jack. You are very kind. -Mohammad

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/1/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thanks for reading my poem. J