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Our Amazing Cleaning Lady

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Our Amazing Cleaning Lady



A sweet young thing comes to our humble abode Once every month without fail Sure ain't your average cleaner type person She zooms through the place like a gale A neighbour once noticed she had a cute li'l bum I told him I wholeheartedly concur We both could wind up with marital problems Accused of being a couple of voyeurs Once we thought of adopting this young sweetie But her hubby would never agree We had to settle for her once a month visits Such a shame between you and me It seems I might have lost my train of thought My engine almost left the station To get back to the fabulous job that she does Sure appreciate her monthly visitation © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:26:00 AM
    this is wonderful Jack,, just love the story this poem creates, a joy to read...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 3/2/2013 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Not your average type cleaning lady! LOL Thanks for dropping by my good friend!
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:40:00 PM
    Does Eileen know something I don't? 'Naughty but Nice'... Are you Santa Clause? Why am I always the last to know!... Does the Elf union know you've been admiring her bum? Does Cathie know? Naughty Santa... Naughty Santa... Sigh... LOL

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 3/1/2013 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm innocent Your Honour! I was just agreeing trying to be a good neighbour! In all honesty I never even noticed her amazing li'l bumsy wumsy! LOL Please please please don't tell Cathie... the couch is REALLY uncomfortable! Hugsssss Naughty Santa! xoxoxox
    Eastman Avatar Carol Eastman
    Date: 3/1/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    If you like bums... Does that make you a bummer?... LOL
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Naughty Jack! But with you...I'm sure I can continue the saying..."Naughty but NICE!" Lovely poem..it made me smile. PLUS...having a nice derriere is a definite ASSet! ;)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 3/1/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love ASSets! They're one of nature's marvellous wonders! LOL Hugs, Naughty Jack xox
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:46:00 AM
    You are looking at the poor girl's bum my friend? I have a feeling this is just a poem, that you really don't look at her bum, you are too kind and respectable of a man to do that! I loved how you put together this incredible write of this girl's visits to your house, what does your wife think of her(ha ha)? What a funny little poem, you have written a clever write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:28:00 AM
    Wooow..... I am impressed.... I have never come across a poem appreciating a maid! This just marks out how your soul is genuine and sweet and humble! May God Bless your heart and pen, Sir!!