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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 1:16:00 AM

    Miss you David, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ TEX

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Nice piece.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:55:00 PM

    Bro, this is so original, just like you! Hugs

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:13:00 AM

    David, I love how you did this one, your comments always brings a smile to my face.. :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:59:00 AM

    I think I may have commented here on this one before .It shows great creativity in its formatting, David. Thanks so much for all your comments you wrote today for my poems. Wish I could stay here longer and try to find poems of yours to comment to. I wonder, do you think I have seen all your poems? It sure seems that way when I try clicking on them!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 9:45:00 PM

    I've been wanting to write one of these so bad... but they look so dang difficult!! Not only a vastly intriguing poem, but you've turned it into an art-form with the format... the "RESTING" line was a nice touch.

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 12:32:00 PM

    Hi, David. Further to the discussion on my blog and my comments: Yes, you have correctly identified this as an ABC poem. TPS has updated the definition on the FORMS today. Love this poem of yours :-) ~ Su

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Hi David; I like the style of your poem. I posted one too, but I don't know if I did it right. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:31:00 AM

    Wonderful poem of ABC of life. Thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:02:00 AM

    Very cool style thanks for the comment and I really enjoyed this poem

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:22:00 AM

    Hi David great ABC style write, me thick so no understandy but love the style, good luck in the contest, hope you are ok, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 2:09:00 PM

    Aha! Knowing the meaning of the last three words makes things clearer. When a woman is involved there is always problems. Really enjoyed your layout. Soup is good about presenting layouts as the writer has written. Often a publisher insists on blocking a poem, and ruining it. Love, daver

    austin Avatar daver austin Date: 3/4/2013 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    There ARE always problems. What am I doing writing poetry? I can't even speak the English language. Sorry. daver
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:44:00 AM

    This is absolutely amazing and the form is perfect my dear friend David! I love it! It's very creative and unique! Thank you so much for sharing and also for your congratulatory comments. More power and blessings to you always! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:44:00 AM

    Dumb Kid is my real-life experience. Please explain "Xanthippe young zitella." Depending on whether a person believes in karma - "does everything fall?" - I can't decide what I believe. daver

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:06:00 AM

    David a very clever ABC Style. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:50:00 AM

    David, thanks for all the kind words on my poems. Love this! So creative! :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:27:00 PM

    Wow, David! This is too cool! I bet it was a challenge, but fun!? I'll attempt it of these days. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 3:06:00 PM

    in blackness resides the everything inside, but too powerful to know, easy as you go, driven to suicide, bro, too many names many places, the subconcious erases, a thousand voices in time, schizophrenia i know seems to flow, and the guilt of the crimes, and your heart beats in time, for the mortal cant know, too awful to show, why he's doing is time in the Earth... Don Johnson re: ABC of Life by David Williams

    JOHNSON Avatar DON JOHNSON Date: 3/3/2013 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    this how your poetry affected me mate... stuff comes n flows with the right stimuli....
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  1. Date: 3/3/2013 1:59:00 PM

    Nice creative write David, love the staircases to heaven xxx

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:36:00 PM

    Hi David , thanks for the trawling of older stuff.. I like this one it's nice to see an ABC that is an ABC love it xx

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:31:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your very interesting work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Can we ever undo venomous words?..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:13:00 AM

    Nice work! I had to look up Xanthippe and zitella, but that's just part of the learning process. J

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:16:00 AM

    I suspect there is way more to this than I comprehend. It is beautiful to read. Enjoyed, John

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:45:00 AM

    This is cool !! I love the artistic way you have set out the ABC-- I am now inspired to try an ABC--looks like one can have a lot of fun with it. Is this also a form of ABC?-- A larmed she sat on a chair B esides herself nobody else was there etc...etc Lv Kim

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:01:00 AM

    this is one of the best small ABC poems I have ever seen. GREAT how you did the REsting word!!! I love this, David.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:05:00 AM

    Brilliant David!! You honestly make everything seem so easy. Your format and form speak with your words. Well Done!! Love ya cap'n deb And thank you for your challenging contest and lessons learned :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 1:27:00 AM

    Amazing write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:37:00 PM

    I'm not gonna lie...I've had a few and this is blowin' my mind...but I get the form now...this is extremely cool, David.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:45:00 PM

    What a remarkable masterpiece ....