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Sea Gypsy

I circle and scan the green seas with eagle eyes
I dive at the speed of sound and spear my prey
I swim the shallows, exploring glittering, coral gardens
I nibble mindlessly at an angry, frightened octopus...

I am Pisces
I am the fish
I have returned
I am home...

Beware the Pisces
Fear the Pisces
Pisces is dangerous,
deadly, lethal
Pisces is infected,
diseased, contagious
He bites
He wounds
He kills
Pisces never rests
Pisces never stops
until he knows why...

(Like a sea gypsy, I restlessly wander the shore
searching for something I cannot name
something lost that I will never find
something buried deep beneath cold, dark waters)

...Extended version of a previous post
For PD's contest

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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:39:00 AM

    I love this approach Tim--congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:14:00 AM

    This is absolutely fascinating! You grabbed my attention with the title, but the poem itself sucked me right in. I love the image of "glittering, coral gardens."

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 6:57:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your super win and lovely write my dear friend, Tim! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 12:28:00 AM

    Awesome write here Tim,,,, are you really Pieces ? My older sis is Pieces . congrats on your win. Thank you for reading Robert Lee,,, his dad's family kinda thought I was naming him George Jones,, his dad's name, like five generations back to Portugal ;}

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:39:00 PM

    Congratulations:-)

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:23:00 AM

    Congrats Tim on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 6:11:00 AM

    Timmy, did you happen to meet any mermaids????I so enjoyed this fishy write..i am saying congrads..

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 10:07:00 PM

    Many many congrats for this wonderful win Tim.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:51:00 PM

    Big Congratulations!!!! Tiberius what a fabulous write!!! Big huggsss dolly

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Mysterious and exciting poem Tim congrats on your big win xxx

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 3:59:00 PM

    YESSSS, this is one I love seeing on a winners list. Congrats!!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:59:00 PM

    Tim, congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Hi Pisces.........shoud we be scared!??? Great poem for a guy with eagle eyes!! Congratulations!!! And hope your birthday recently was sensational!!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:49:00 AM

    Tim, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~ PD

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:37:00 PM

    I like the idea and presentation..Good work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:55:00 PM

    Like a sea gypsy that me. Tim an awesome poem. Make sure you get your metal detector out and barefoot down the beach-treasures to find. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:42:00 AM

    Always a delight to read, Tim. Well done as usual. I hope all is well. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:52:00 AM

    ooooh, this is GREAT writing!!!!! I hope my mention of your sun sign inspired you to post it?