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counterlife

Wanting, waiting
Desperately seeking
Searching, eyes fading
Tears are streaking
Hope not abating

Looking for signs
Distant, heartbeat
Stars to align
To be complete
Have something as mine

Here within the void
Widening, berth
Love to be enjoyed
All that its worth 
Not to be toyed

Lost to life
Stranded, islet
Upon stormy strife
To be found yet
In the counterlife.


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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:43:00 PM

    Andrea, thank you for sharing your poem, a deep void ... ~ always & forever ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:43:00 PM

    ............................. ‡ I Am Going To Favour This Beautiful Painting. *

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:41:00 PM

    ‡ Love Should Never Be Looked Upon As A Game Or To Be Toyed With As Your Lovely Beauty So Paints, Sweet Beautiful Andrea! ˜ 'Love To Be Enjoyed,' Is As Love Should Truly And Forever Be ˜ I Noticed I Used A Lot Of, 'Be's;' Perhaps For 'Beautiful! ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    TRAVIS Avatar ANDREA TRAVIS Date: 2/28/2013 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your sweet comment! I have barely written all winter! Glad to be back in the mood again. Trying some different styles hopefully! Thanks for mentioning that I used a lot of "be's", I need more kind critiques! With life & love, Andrea