Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

A Small Voice

I see, but I am blind
I hear, but I am deaf
I taste, but all is bland
I touch, but I do not feel
I smell, but the scent is elusive

Our senses conforming to the world
Influenced and molded by that deceptive designer
So skillful and crafty in guiding us away
Ever so masterfully allowing us our way
That we become accustomed to being in the darkness

What was once Holy is seen as folly
Truth is eroded, past rules are just old-fashioned
Being modern, everything is acceptable
What fun, join the crowd, we are free
Free to experience everything the world offers

But we have this small inner voice
Almost extinguished by that smiling deceiver
Something inside whispers during our quiet times
That our way is going against the grain
Some unexplainable sixth sense speaking softly
Fleeting thoughts of some other direction
A pull in our hearts that will not go away

Another way begins to enter our consciousness
A way that reveals our freedom is actually bondage
And that true freedom is found when we come to believe
In that One who comes to us where we are
All faults known, we are accepted and forgiven
By that One who has waited so long for us to come home

An unknown kind of love shown by our Heavenly Father
Who wants to be in a relationship with those so undeserving
The veil is lifted and our senses are refocused on His way
We are accepted as a child of God because of One on a cross
We then know true freedom enjoyed with Him for eternity


Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 6:16:00 PM

    Allen, this is such a beautiful poem expressing your strong faith that pens a message from us all. A very warm and inspiring message my friend. Thank you for commenting on my poem Winter's Rose. Wishing you a wonderful Easter. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Braaten Avatar Allen Braaten Date: 4/2/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gail, thanks for the kind remarks. They mean a lot to me. AJ
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:31:00 PM

    Allen, the lifting up the veil, reveals a very strong message. I'm very impressed with the way your poem spoke to me. thank you for the inspiration~ always & forever ;-) LINDA

    Braaten Avatar Allen Braaten Date: 3/2/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The words were written as guided by the Spirit to speak to the heart. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. AJ
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:35:00 PM

    This is an awesome poem with an amazing message...thank you for sharing it with me

    Braaten Avatar Allen Braaten Date: 2/28/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I knew when I wrote it that someone would be quite affected by these words guided by the Spirit. That one is you.