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Do you like my raven eyes

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Do you like my raven eyes

As I walked down the street 
this morning 
I tried to be polite and inconspicuous 
You stare into my eyes; 
My brown eyes speak louder than my 
Husky voice ever will 

What are you looking for? 
Do you liked what you see 
Pain, shame or a sense of connection 
Love, nowhere to be found 
It ruthless, it vanishes, it disappoint 
By now us all know the stories 
Of lost-love, 

It begin with a smile 
A kiss, a warm embrace, 
Then tear and fears 
Do you love the raven in my eyes 
Sorry stranger! 
I paid my tithes, 

However, 

I lost my loves 
Caw, caw, caw! 
Do you love the raven in my eyes

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  1. Date: 4/3/2013 10:11:00 PM

    Very powerful and great symbols Best, SuZ

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander Date: 4/4/2013 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Suzanne