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Vertigo

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Vertigo

I'm falling, falling
falling so far
so deep
so fast
so reckless
Yes I'm falling, falling
God help me I'm falling
Why am I falling
so crazy
so madly
so helplessly
in love with you...

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:28:00 PM
    what a fall Tim,:-). Congratulations, with your awesome once upon a time poet destroyer winning poem HIT. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:36:00 AM
    Congrats, Tim! My second time reading this one and I loved it again.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Tim putting a smile on my face this morning. Thank you, and a big congrats on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 6:13:00 PM
    awesome poem. SandyIvy

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 4:19:00 PM
    great one, tim! congrats!

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:03:00 AM
    great write.Falling from I to become we is really great indeed.nice to read. Congrats for the win again

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 11:57:00 PM
    Tim.. stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:55:00 AM
    big smile... :) very nice poem dear Tim..:) all the best my friend <3

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 2:59:00 PM
    Tim, congrats on your fabulous 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Outstanding well deserved win, Tim. Congrats. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:51:00 AM
    This is SO sweet, Tim! I am honoured to share a spot with you in PD's contest. Great job, my friend :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Tim, I had to catch myself--love the lead in--congrats

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:13:00 AM
    How could these words not bring a smile !! Love !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:07:00 AM
    Tim, a very good poem, and you have got first place! - Congratulations! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Tim, love the imagery. Congrats on a fine write and win.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 7:16:00 PM
    you spin me round round... ha this one is already a favorite poem of mine... Congratulations Tim, have yourself a sweet night... xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:11:00 AM
    Good morning Tim, you know your falling. .. cuz it's easy to fall. Oh my but crazy and madly, are the key words:-D im glad this not about some one particular. Cause if it was, your in trouble.... once the vertigo goes away...lol just kidding. .. I know your hearts landing to the perfect feeling of love. ..I do not know why, but I feel like favoring this nice and sweet fall of yours. Hugs and hugs...love Linda

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Wonderful free falling Poem Tim, been there , and yes like you say it's vertigo.. love this, and reading it as made me feel good...

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Kind of recalls an old Roy Orbison song, Tim. I like it!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Very nice Tim :-)

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