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About This Poem

Vertigo

I'm falling, falling
falling so far
so deep
so fast
so reckless
Yes I'm falling, falling
God help me I'm falling
Why am I falling
so crazy
so madly
so helplessly
in love with you...

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    Sukmawati Komala
    Date: 3/17/2013 6:55:00 AM
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    big smile... :) very nice poem dear Tim..:) all the best my friend <3
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 3/16/2013 2:59:00 PM
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    Tim, congrats on your fabulous 1st place win! Love, Kim
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    RALPH TAYLOR
    Date: 3/13/2013 8:57:00 PM
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    Outstanding well deserved win, Tim. Congrats. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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    Heather Ober
    Date: 3/11/2013 10:51:00 AM
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    This is SO sweet, Tim! I am honoured to share a spot with you in PD's contest. Great job, my friend :)
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    craig cornish
    Date: 3/11/2013 6:38:00 AM
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    Tim, I had to catch myself--love the lead in--congrats
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    Debra Squyres
    Date: 3/10/2013 11:13:00 AM
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    How could these words not bring a smile !! Love !! Congrats on your win !!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/10/2013 7:07:00 AM
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    Tim, a very good poem, and you have got first place! - Congratulations! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Rick Zablocki
    Date: 3/10/2013 6:45:00 AM
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    Tim, love the imagery. Congrats on a fine write and win.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 3/9/2013 7:16:00 PM
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    you spin me round round... ha this one is already a favorite poem of mine... Congratulations Tim, have yourself a sweet night... xox~PD
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    Becca Lucas
    Date: 3/4/2013 4:49:00 PM
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    What an awesome feeling...
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 3/2/2013 5:11:00 AM
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    Good morning Tim, you know your falling. .. cuz it's easy to fall. Oh my but crazy and madly, are the key words:-D im glad this not about some one particular. Cause if it was, your in trouble.... once the vertigo goes away...lol just kidding. .. I know your hearts landing to the perfect feeling of love. ..I do not know why, but I feel like favoring this nice and sweet fall of yours. Hugs and hugs...love Linda
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    harry horsman
    Date: 3/1/2013 5:55:00 AM
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    Wonderful free falling Poem Tim, been there , and yes like you say it's vertigo.. love this, and reading it as made me feel good...
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    Roy Jerden
    Date: 2/28/2013 8:06:00 PM
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    Kind of recalls an old Roy Orbison song, Tim. I like it!
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 2/28/2013 5:06:00 PM
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    Very nice Tim :-)
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    jack horne
    Date: 2/28/2013 3:26:00 PM
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    you've captured the feeling perfectly, Tim - there's room for more than one yellow submarine in Soup's vast sea, lol
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 2/28/2013 8:59:00 AM
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    I feel as if I am spinning out of control right next to you!!
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 2/28/2013 8:36:00 AM
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    Both an exhilirating and a terrifying feeling. Good one. BG
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/28/2013 4:39:00 AM
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    Vertigo..I love the poem ..It defines the title so.well Tim


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