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Jewel of dawn



stunned 
amazed

heavy fog 
enveloped 

 when can
my jewel appreared
my  hope
await 
ornament coolish drops 

clear choice
ripple of soft cold 
persuade patience

my smile danced
saw
 jewel rays
silver hacked nosedive 
expanse of 
sky illuminating earth 

welcome 
jewel dawn 
tucked 
new hope

let me be 
your lover

 jewel of dawn 

~ sukmawati komala ~ 
2013 february 28

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:49:00 AM

    EXQUISITE !!! LOVE The sparkle in your charming writes...

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 4:11:00 PM

    You sure do create a lot of gems with your words. this is another of your crowing jewels!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:50:00 AM

    .................... ‡ Pss., 'Let Me Be, Your Lover, Jewel Of Dawn.' ˜ I Love Love Love That Romantic Beautiful Verse, Sweet Beautiful Sukmawati! ˜ Thank You, Beautiful Girl For Your Lovely Wonderful Visit; Always Sooo Sweet ˜ My Love, Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:31:00 AM

    I too am 'stunned, amazed'...stunned and amazed by the beauty of this verse...'ripple of soft cold'...what a line, what a poem...Have a blessed day dearest friend - Tim

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:34:00 AM

    My favorite part of the day.....thanks for sharing. Scott

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 10:28:00 AM

    Hello my dearest friend! so happy to stop by and read this so sweet and awesome write of yours. I love it and I'll fav. this one! Thank you so much my dear SK. Big hugs to you! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 5:05:00 AM

    ................... ‡ Ps., Caught A Late Night Red Eye And Wished To Pass Back By, Sweet Beautiful Sukmawati, To Say Thank You For Your Lovely Beauty's Kind Visit; 'Joy.' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel * 'Have A Very Beautiful Day *

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:48:00 AM

    ‡ 'Let Me Be Your Lover,' I Love The Way In Which Your Beauty Concludes This Lovely Painting Amid Uniques Swirling Colours, Sweet Beautiful Sukmawati! ˜ May Your Heart's Wishes Be Granted As Love Abounds ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *