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Reflections of love Contest

I was all of six years old
He was a big boy of 12
I adored him

Showed me how to use a fishing rod
He was my little tin god
I worshipped him

In my teenager years he spoke of love
Wasn’t me he was talking about
I loved him

As we got older the age difference grew less
Looked at me with interest, not just a pest
Can see me at last

Asks me out on a date, first of many
Had a fantastic time, love grows a plenty
Togetherness wow

On our wedding day, both nervous but pleased
From the age of just 6 was all I had dreamed
In love .with love.

The wardrobe mirror reflects every move and more
From tumbled love making , to sleep and snore
Still love him

Parents now, one of each
Teaching them to wait for what’s out of reach
We adore them

27/02.2013
Contest : reflections of love

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:51:00 PM

    So sweet! Great life

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/1/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Susan for stopping by ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:15:00 AM

    Seren you little romantic....David soup mail...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/28/2013 1:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awww David its all in the mind - damn - ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:55:00 PM

    Very beautiful, how long you 2 been married? :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/27/2013 11:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, just a poem ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:06:00 PM

    The love was always there! I like the set up!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/27/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Scribe....Seren
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:24:00 PM

    What a beautiful love story. Well written I enjoyed it from start to end.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/27/2013 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Abigale. Glad you enjoyed...Seren
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:47:00 PM

    Absolutely beautiful, Seren! This, your grand children will be reading one day and it's melt their hearts. A definite winner in my book! Love, Annalise

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/27/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Annalise ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:40:00 PM

    This is a delightful and wonderful write my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, quite the gorgeous poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/27/2013 9:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Russell ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:08:00 PM

    Beautiful Seren...good luck...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/27/2013 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Donna couldnt work out the name of the form, any suggestions?