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Passing Through The Black Hole

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Passing Through The Black Hole

Slicing the instinct
The arcane was torn, curses spit
Teardrop bated as the breath hunts
Wound wide open, the heart cries

The ripple of pain unable to stem
The cimmerian sigh loud and stay
Body falls along with the bridge of hope
Toying life unwillingly to be blamed

The chain of fate convoluted by mistakes
Incised by the foredoom of another story
Shouted a shout inevitable said
Reverses direction and unpredictably impaled

Breath blows the true bitterness
Jaded in each lamentation
Tired of every abnormalities which frequently ensue
Longing for the things which reasonably flows as it should

Life is about to choose
Though destiny had its own script
We have awarded a red carpet, but
Sorry if we still have to walk on the imperfections of life

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Good night Yanny

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 7:26:00 PM
    fate and destiny have a script unlike ours.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/12/2013 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Agree with that :) thank you for visiting :D "the situation" in here :p
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:29:00 PM
    Hi Yanny, are you done with all your marking?

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/12/2013 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Today is the last day, I will catch up soon :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 5:51:00 AM
    Every day has its challenges, and we learn something new .... Hope your day will be beautiful. - A very well written poem Yanny ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/10/2013 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne, wishing you a beautiful day as well :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:37:00 AM
    And we do all have to walk on the imperfections of life but as they say Yanny , 'what doesn't kill us makes us stronger', but I could do with that red carpet sometime luv, another wonder from you xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/9/2013 5:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Agree Mandy! I do believe what doesn't kill us make us stronger :D, it is really interesting to know what you are thinking Mandy :D, wishing you wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:25:00 AM
    Hey Yanny, I'm still here in Mexico enjoying the sun. I hope all is well with you this evening.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/9/2013 5:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad to hear from you Rick, wishing you a happy holiday in exotic Mexico :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:31:00 PM
    I always love the imagery you sprinkle throughout your poetry. Wonderful!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/9/2013 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea glad that you like it :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:36:00 PM
    I like your poem Yanny, i like the jaded image, deep... great flow,, the way it should be..pd

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/5/2013 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda :D, pleasured to have you here :D, have a wonderful day :)- hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:30:00 PM
    I read your poem again, it is very good. I hope today is nothing but wonderful for you Yanny.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/5/2013 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick for your visit today, I'm still focusing on my work and cannot wait for next week when all my my hectic time is over :D, so that I can write for some more :D, glad to see your present today :), wishing you a wonderful day as well :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:53:00 AM
    This is a beautiful write Yanny. Your last stanza is just great. Thanks and have a nice day. Lucilla

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/5/2013 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucii, :D wishing you wonderful day as well :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Hi Yanny luv this superb, just luv it girl xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/3/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy, nice to have you here too :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:01:00 AM
    such sincerity in here Yanny, speaks volumes of you not only as a poet, but as a person...wonderful poetry..

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I really feel touched by your words, they are deep for me :D, thank you Harry for giving time to visit, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 2:33:00 AM
    This is really true. Such an amazing write of yours which I've extremely enjoyed reading today my dear friend Yanny. I will favourite this one if you don't mind. Thank you so much for sharing! love always, Leonora

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/1/2013 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Leonora it is really such an honor for me :D, wishing you a wonderful night there :) - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:39:00 AM
    A morning treat, I am so happy to read your poem this morning. This was a great way to begin my day.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/28/2013 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, a morning treat to me too for having such an uplifting comment by you :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:32:00 PM
    A gripping , powerful piece! Quite sensational! Thanks for sharing this splendid write! Hope to read more from you soon! Always, Laura

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/27/2013 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Laura, glad that you like it :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, Yanny