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Basement

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Basement

Stillborn static cry
Smothered screeching granite knife
Crimson chalk demise 

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  1. Date: 2/28/2009 5:55:00 PM

    Yikes! Sounds pretty scary to me. The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in a creative way. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 10:23:00 PM

    This Senryu is both terrible and deep. I like it, Xavier, good job. Ruben.