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Translucent Wings

This paradox of flesh and spirit...
One being bright as the other dark
Withering it's flower aneath celestials sun
Ageless her renewing in timeless waters
Metaphoric streams a cocoon she waits..
Restless, these dreams to escape; to fly away.

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:51:00 PM

    Yes....they are just words. And yet you fold them together and sprinkle them around to magically build a different world with them. Beautiful. Fresh. Light. Heavy. You are a poet :^)

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:14:00 PM

    Got that correct..Flesh being carnal and worldly..That Spirit wanting what is right and good..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:57:00 AM

    Beautiful poem!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 10:56:00 AM

    a dreamy poem of yours friend Rachel....so like to fly in a world of dreams...thanks for sharing this and thanks always for your nice comments :) Good night my dear..hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:57:00 AM

    This is a very beautiful poem with a fantastic and magical feeling. I love it and I extremely enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend Rachel! Have a great day in sunshine! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:06:00 AM

    lovley rachel, take your wings and fly high my dear, such a lovley write, God bless you always love diane x

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:03:00 PM

    Beautiful images abound in your poem that cause one to stop and reflect, Rachel. I love it. Much love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:13:00 PM

    Just wondrous !

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Rachel, your poem is dreamy, full of wonderful words, well done, constance