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SADNESS

SADNESS 



The sun 
Gloomy has risen today
For
Your smile has missed  
The dawn!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
     27 February 2013

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:39:00 PM

    You really know how to put words together. A smile might do away with the sadness. Lucilla

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/5/2013 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, Lucilla, every smile is a ray of hope! Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 6:58:00 PM

    You Demetrious bring a smile to all who encounter you!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:18:00 PM

    A heart breaker you are Demetrios...

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/5/2013 5:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh my dear, how could I, a mere mortal!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:23:00 PM

    awe, i know this feeling... sometimes it takes a certain smile... to promote a good day... always~ PD

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/27/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So nice to hear from you again! Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:18:00 AM

    Hi there, another romantic write from you Demetrios cc

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/27/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mandy! I was thinking to pay a visit today and I will!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:52:00 AM

    You are a wonderfully romantic poet. This is another testament to that! I loved it! Hugs!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/27/2013 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am sorry, the message bellow was ment for Anne Lise, I do not know how it was posted here! Thank you my dear for your generous words!
    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/27/2013 4:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My ancestor philosophers used to say that “Brevity is philosophizing” Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:45:00 AM

    - Small but very powerful, Demetrios! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/27/2013 5:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne Lise thank for your visit and your lovely comment. I repeat my reply. My ancestor philosophers used to say that “Brevity is philosophizing” Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:42:00 AM

    Demetrios very romantic...David

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/27/2013 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David you are a romantic and that is perfect!