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Drown to Rise feat Michael J Falotico

These are thundering noises that I hear
They are thumping in my ears, pump restlessness to my head
I feel like I'm going to explode
Breathe no more.. I gasp my last air 

They're getting louder
I run so fast till I can't feel my feet
I run so fast till I care no more but sounds of my steps
I’m still not breathing

So this is how I die
Drowned by my fear and worries

 
With my chin just over the point where I could breathe..

I French kiss the air to show my fight and belief…

I won’t leave this cruel world like this, not this way..

My life needs to be read and my dreams another day…

My crawl becomes a walk and my stride now a run..

Because this heart is strong and my soul is not done…



Collaboration feat Michael J. Falotico

Special thanks to Michael J. Falotico that has completed this poem in a perfect way :)

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 12:11:00 PM

    Awesome collab with an awesome guy:-) It can`t fail when two such great writers put their heads together.Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:25:00 PM

    Dinda, Di, there are a lot of endearments for you that spring to my mind looking at you and now reading the talent that flows from your creative quill, awesome collab from two of the finest poets the soup has..kudos to you..love and huggs to you Lady Di.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Very good collaberation.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:34:00 PM

    what a lovely poem ...congratulation for both of you this is so amazing,,, :) enjoyed so much <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:01:00 PM

    It was such a wonderful pleasure to write and create with you Dinda. Your a talent and a sweet friend. xoxo Michael

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:07:00 PM

    A very lovey and wonderful poem, Michael did a wonderful job on the remainder of your poem. a good posting..pd

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:42:00 AM

    - You + Michael ..... (a good mix) it must be a wonderful poem. - BRAVO!!!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:40:00 AM

    Dinda and Michael an excellent collab, love both parts...David