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Black Lace Our Love

Slipping from her beauty's black lace negligee...
Voluptuous her velvet breast, crowned in raptures
Silkened hues a melody as she, removing her stockings
Six inch heels an hourglass and light; placed upon my heart
Her love these waves of red their sanguine kiss; perfumed petals.
                                                                                             

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:17:00 AM

    In my previous comment, that should have been ... Will be READING more of yours. Guess I should proof read my comments, sorry!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:15:00 AM

    I like the way you present these feelings and moments without be vulgar. Very nice poetry Rachel. Will be ready more of yours after I run errands. And, thanks for commenting on mine. Just found this site so I have tons of poetry to upload but, will take me some time. I hope you read more as I add them. Thanks again.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:55:00 PM

    Sigh....just... Sigh.....I think this is beyond lovely. And Diane is right, your comments on the poems of others are always kind and encouraging. Talented and kind! Well done you :^)

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:03:00 AM

    so lovingly written, thanks for your kind comments my dear, you are a treasure to us al here at poetry soup, and a great encourager to keep our pens writing, God bless you always. xx

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Turn the hour glass up side down. Why? And start all over again.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:20:00 PM

    Beautiful Rachel