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My Broken Heart

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My Broken Heart

             ~My Broken Heart~

Since I woke up today my heart has been complaining why 
lately I am tormenting it, why cant I leave it alone, why am 
I pushing it to the limit of being constantly in pain, why don't 
I have a nice conversation to reach a solution for the 
coming future and try to treat our days respectfully.

I have been adding a lot of pressure on it out of this dark 
room, its agonizing, it cant take it anymore, I felt it whispering 
to me please just be more tolerant & pray as this era is a 
lasting one.
Forgetting your passion to survive will wear me off and 
destroy us due to your broken heart.

Life gets harder by the day, I know your crying as your 
partner left you after all those treasured years, be ready
to fight the hatred that devastated your soul and integrated 
revenge against him, instead of trying to find tranquility.

Together we will beg your thoughts to accept the 
unacceptable and do your best to never get 
discouraged. 

Aging is a process we cannot stop it from happening, 
knowing that you have to be reasonable to ease our
everyday, how can we find some peace during this 
episode of instability, you have to regroup to remove 
that heavy burden you are adding daily on me, you are
destroying my strength, you are torturing me, you are 
chocking me, I cant breath anymore, have mercy on me, 
you have few years to live, together we will find some 
peace to ease our pain.
 
Talk to me, I am here to help you, survive with some 
common sense remember tomorrow`s life is too late; 
live today, we can live remembering some of your past 
happy moments, and you should hold up to your 
children that warming mother, do not trespass on your 
solitude, choose your priorities, let it be them.

Open your door and take me with you, but first remember 
you were a pretty woman, you went to the hairdresser,you 
put make up, you get dressed, you phone them up your 
friends and arrange an outing, they also rely on you, help 
them survive, realizing you have a lot of friends who miss 
you and depend on you, they became unsteady because 
of your refusal to see them to go anywhere with them.

You were a strong person, now you weakened me, you were 
a good fighter, now you are taking all the blows and not fighting, 
I am tired I need to rest, to laugh, to drink a glass of wine, 
I need to feel and look alive, suffocating me will reach your 
children and they will become helpless because they love you 
so much and they do not want you to remain in that stage of 
helplessness, a no return to survival.

You know the more you add tension on me, the more by the 
minute I wont be able to support you we will perish, 
is this what you want? what about your children who adore you? 
They have blurry eyes lately as you intentionally stopped sharing 
your unsteadiness of your broken heart since your man of 43 years 
took the door a month ago, you pushed him away as he does not 
deserve your love, he betrayed you with another woman, and you 
are sure of that. 
Please retaliate against the man who left you with a broken heart
by wanting to love life, it is still beautiful without him. 
                                                                                           Therese Bacha
                                                                                            30/3/2013
                                                                      Contest of PD. Broken Heart.

                                                                               ( No. 5 Win.)

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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 2:55:00 PM

    Terry, I am happy to see this poem of yours honored on PD's winners' list. I sure do remember this one. Keep writing your heart out, sweet lady. Congratulations, luv, Andrea

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 4/3/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Andrea, you know it is a poetry only, henis with me. Love Terry xoxoxo see you tonight. Thank you Love Terry xoxoxoox
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 10:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on this magnificent winning poem...Donna

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 4/1/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Donna, thank you so much for passing by. Love Terry
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Congrats, Terry. Awesome. Nice going. Happy Easter. hugs, Ralph

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/31/2013 10:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you again Ralph so nice of you to pass by. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:08:00 PM

    Hi Terry, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/31/2013 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi PD, I am a little sad today i just lost my young brother. But i have to let you know how grateful i am because of you i am who i am today, your accepting me in nearly all your contests made me feel i can write poetry, you gave me another life nearly without sadness. I love you and thank you so much. Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:39:00 AM

    Everytime you write you take me with you to.the depth of your heart..I wanna reach out but im weaker than many when it comes to pain ...illnesses and more.I am a completely hopeless person and when it comes to.the alley s end ..my only comfort is. God..He sees beyomd each present problem..Rely on Him dear...Big hugs

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/10/2013 4:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi my friend, i am so happy to read your beautiful words from the heart, thank you so much, sorry i was late in answering...... have a beautiful day. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:15:00 AM

    An awesome poem my dear friend and i extremely enjoyed reading it tonight! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a nice day and take care always! love and hugs, Leonora

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/28/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much,,, its nice of you to read my poem, ,, i am trying to coop, and getting better gradually....i am encouraged by your words....Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:34:00 AM

    My dearest Terry, What a fantastic, real, down to earth and absolutely true story it is! It deserves my admiration and the highest possible mark!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/28/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.....nice of you to come by...have a nice day....Terry
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:32:00 PM

    Terry; This is a great poem. I'm glad that you had that talk with youe heart. Take his advice - there is no spare and if there is - it costs too much. I hope you are in good health. Take care and God bless you. Lucilla

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/27/2013 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Lucy,,,,,thank you for your feelings,,,,trust me Lucy i am feeling so much better, writing and all of you are so nice and supportive....i hope soon i can travel to San Francisco and be with my son....i love your new picture you look amazing.......love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:57:00 PM

    You always write with such compassion and sensitivity, my friend. Good to see you here and I am seeing many of your comments around Soup. I hope more and more people will come to see your poems. Luv, Andrea

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/26/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My dearest friend, those painful poems that i write lately come from my depth, i get worried when i read them again, but while writing i feel relieved, a strange confusing sensation i am having for the time being i will go on...thank you so much for your deep compliments....see you later ..love Terry xoxoxoxoxo
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:40:00 AM

    dear Terry..this is superb!!! so nice and great written.. i enjoyed so much each line and verses .. thank you for sharing your brilliant thought <3 luv Sk

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/26/2013 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much SK. i do appreciate your sharing, so nice of you.....have a great day.......Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:02:00 AM

    Terry I just love the path of this very fine poem, very well done...David

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/26/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi David my faithful friend, thank you for your nice words....Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:50:00 AM

    My dear Therese...please please please...listen to your heart. It will not lead you astray. Also...there is a higher voice that directs you. I hope that you will find the joy and peace that your heart desires. I know about pain and hopelessness, but also...I know about love and beauty. We are kindred spirits! Hugs!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/26/2013 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Eileen, again i see you when i am desperate, and your comments help to accept reality,,thank you i soon will. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:35:00 PM

    - Your life is turned upside down ..... you get scared, helpless and sad. - I've been in your "shoes" .... most importantly it is then you must not forget to live, yes .... Life is too short to be sad and heavy tanks. - Let your heart beat for joy and happiness. - Hope your day will be fine - think positive thoughts - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 2/26/2013 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne. I am so sorry i keep adding a lot of sadness on all of you, i shouldn't, but yesterdays news got me off balance. So i will find a way soon. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo