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About This Poem

YOU

YOU

Your 
Uncaring eyes
Push me 
Repulsively 
Braise me down to a pit of abysmal. 
Your balance ego 
Keeps me on void
Tainting my walls
While I, 
Twitch
Bitter 
Words 
of yuck
Behind your back.

~SKAT~

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  1. Timperley Avatar
    Dave Timperley
    Date: 5/16/2013 12:18:00 PM
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    Bittersweet, I love your use of yuck! God Bless. Dave.
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    Mari Roberts
    Date: 5/14/2013 10:21:00 AM
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    Loved the "bitter words of yuck" lol! Cool way to express that.
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    Lehel Lorant Kiss
    Date: 5/8/2013 2:36:00 PM
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    I like this, short, concise and to the point. Thank you for dropping by and saying hi :)
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    Stucz Arnold
    Date: 5/7/2013 5:59:00 AM
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    sometimes less is more,great poem.
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    Chuma Okonkwo
    Date: 5/6/2013 10:46:00 PM
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    Hi SKAT, I just love the way you expressed your feelings in that poem. It's really intriguing. Thanks for dropping by. xx
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    Ernest Badounts
    Date: 4/25/2013 12:17:00 AM
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    love this poem i have similar genre poetry its very intresting how love can be so cruel yet sweet at the same time unfair in loving a wrong person is the worst
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    Kylie Ivey
    Date: 4/24/2013 3:02:00 PM
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    I like it:) like how you used such short lines and made it sound great:)
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    Vesna Kovrlija
    Date: 4/21/2013 1:53:00 PM
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    So sincere! Great poem!
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    Carl Fraser
    Date: 4/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
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    I would bet there was a few more choice words besides yuck, chin up my friend, it will heal in time, blessings, Carl
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    david scott
    Date: 4/18/2013 12:18:00 PM
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    NICE THOUGHTS EXPRESSED HERTE LOVE THE PATTERN HOW ARE YOU XX DAVIDSCOTT
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 4/17/2013 2:57:00 PM
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    You..yes You!:-) Straight from Your heart and soul.Awesome and powerful,keep you pen working Skat.Hugs,Arild
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    Ginger Amee Terdue
    Date: 4/17/2013 3:10:00 AM
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    Hi, Glad to read so beautiful a comment by you. just passing by but cant afford to ignore you. sorry if am that late. Anyway, this witty piece caught me off-guard and i was like: Yuk! You saw through my past! Not now anyway, thanks for the reminder.
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    Hashim Nizamani
    Date: 4/16/2013 8:46:00 PM
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    Find a way for friendshp, this poem may take the person far away whom u r talking with! Haha kidding... U seem angry through here!
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/16/2013 7:01:00 PM
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    People like that...augh.. What a great , powerful piece. Can relate. Bet many can. stay sweet Always, Laura
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    Kim Morrison
    Date: 4/16/2013 5:18:00 PM
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    I like this piece. It has a lot of emotion and is quite powerful.
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    Red OMara
    Date: 4/16/2013 12:08:00 AM
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    Lot of emotion there, Skat and angry at that. I've just found this poem and notice that it was posted 2days before I posted one of the same name. I'll change mine to Us. - Red
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    daver austin
    Date: 4/14/2013 9:26:00 AM
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    The person you speak of must be a cad and a bounder.. Tell him to his face - "You mamma eat trash!" Always enjoy your stuff. Love, daver
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    Stephanie Weeks
    Date: 4/13/2013 6:16:00 PM
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    strong words. describes how i feel sometimes.
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    bl devnath
    Date: 4/13/2013 11:04:00 AM
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    Normally happens but after sometimes becomes alright, but pain takes unnecessary time. Thanks, loved always, bl
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    Dinda Minardi
    Date: 4/13/2013 9:39:00 AM
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    wow, full of hatred, Skat. A powerful one :)
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    Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/12/2013 4:54:00 PM
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    Sharp & full of bite. I loved this.
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    Justin Bordner
    Date: 4/12/2013 2:01:00 PM
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    Its good to resist domination, even better to succeed - I can relate well to this struggle Skat - J.A.B. %
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    Donald Williams
    Date: 4/12/2013 12:33:00 PM
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    Most interesting read here, thank you for sharing.
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    David Williams
    Date: 4/7/2013 7:32:00 AM
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    Skat still waiting for your next piece...
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    Frank Polgar
    Date: 3/31/2013 9:08:00 AM
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    Sending Happy Easter wishes!
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 3/30/2013 10:24:00 PM
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    Hello my very dear Skat/Sidney! I'm stopping by to greet you and your family a blessed and Happy Easter Season! May God bless you & your family always! You're always in my prayers. love much forever, Leonora
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 3/29/2013 3:50:00 PM
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    Girl; this is pretty strong, but than some people deserve it. Smile - the best is yet to come. I'm saying a prayer for your family. Happy Easter and many blessings...... Lucy
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 3/29/2013 11:34:00 AM
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    Good Day friend SKAT, thanks for dropping by...Have a blessed day to you and to your family..my prayers are with you all..love, Maria
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/28/2013 11:27:00 PM
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    Hi, Skat, thanks for your recent comments. It's always good to hear from you and your sis!!! I hope she will be ok from what has just happened in your family. My sympathies for you all.
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    Frank Polgar
    Date: 3/28/2013 1:10:00 PM
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    "Bitter words of yuck" ... Interesting choice of words. Your poem makes a very strong statement! I can feel the knives twisting!
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