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About This Poem

YOU

YOU

Your 
Uncaring eyes
Push me 
Repulsively 
Braise me down to a pit of abysmal. 
Your balance ego 
Keeps me on void
Tainting my walls
While I, 
Twitch
Bitter 
Words 
of yuck
Behind your back.

~SKAT~

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    Shiraz Iqbal
    Date: 6/17/2013 10:46:00 PM
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    few words and boom....lovely poem Skat.... Shiraz
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    Hakim Coriano
    Date: 6/17/2013 3:10:00 PM
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    You tell it like it is, I like your stile!
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    Peter Duggan
    Date: 6/17/2013 2:28:00 PM
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    I loved that one, be sounds like a bit of a Muppet, this man, thoroughly enjoyed the read, thank you, Skat
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    Yosra Khardani
    Date: 6/15/2013 10:11:00 AM
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    smoothly written, I like it :)
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    david scott
    Date: 6/14/2013 3:18:00 PM
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    WELL WRITTEN LOVE YOUR METAPHORS HERE XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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    Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/11/2013 3:23:00 AM
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    Hey Skat, thanks for the compliments. I also appreciates your poems. Keep it up. chat with me on facebook olivia Bedell Nimley.
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    Robert Burton
    Date: 6/10/2013 10:34:00 PM
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    Wow.... This is beautiful... I love how you express every word and breath life into it
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    John Ginesi
    Date: 6/8/2013 12:43:00 AM
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    Hi Skat, judging by this poem you do not like this person as you used the term'Yuck', that is really telling him/her. You have a good way of expressing your mind, all the best. John
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    Judy Konos
    Date: 6/1/2013 3:26:00 PM
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    Unsure, without looking it up, as to what a abysmal is....but he sounds like a real jerk. Let me know if you need some help, the baseball bat awaits in the attic
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    Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:33:00 PM
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    Brief, direct, and excellent. Kim
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    Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 5/27/2013 9:32:00 PM
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    Excellent stuff from you Skat,i really enjoyed perusing this.
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    Claiborne Randle
    Date: 5/26/2013 5:52:00 AM
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    very strong
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    Prisita Dwyer
    Date: 5/25/2013 1:58:00 PM
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    YOU'RE GREAT!
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 5/21/2013 10:21:00 PM
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    Short and to the point on poem. love phyl
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    Dave Timperley
    Date: 5/16/2013 12:18:00 PM
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    Bittersweet, I love your use of yuck! God Bless. Dave.
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    Mari Roberts
    Date: 5/14/2013 10:21:00 AM
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    Loved the "bitter words of yuck" lol! Cool way to express that.
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    Lehel Lorant Kiss
    Date: 5/8/2013 2:36:00 PM
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    I like this, short, concise and to the point. Thank you for dropping by and saying hi :)
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    Stucz Arnold
    Date: 5/7/2013 5:59:00 AM
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    sometimes less is more,great poem.
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    Chuma Okonkwo
    Date: 5/6/2013 10:46:00 PM
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    Hi SKAT, I just love the way you expressed your feelings in that poem. It's really intriguing. Thanks for dropping by. xx
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    Ernest Badounts
    Date: 4/25/2013 12:17:00 AM
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    love this poem i have similar genre poetry its very intresting how love can be so cruel yet sweet at the same time unfair in loving a wrong person is the worst
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    Kylie Ivey
    Date: 4/24/2013 3:02:00 PM
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    I like it:) like how you used such short lines and made it sound great:)
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    Vesna Kovrlija
    Date: 4/21/2013 1:53:00 PM
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    So sincere! Great poem!
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    Carl Fraser
    Date: 4/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
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    I would bet there was a few more choice words besides yuck, chin up my friend, it will heal in time, blessings, Carl
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    david scott
    Date: 4/18/2013 12:18:00 PM
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    NICE THOUGHTS EXPRESSED HERTE LOVE THE PATTERN HOW ARE YOU XX DAVIDSCOTT
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 4/17/2013 2:57:00 PM
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    You..yes You!:-) Straight from Your heart and soul.Awesome and powerful,keep you pen working Skat.Hugs,Arild
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    Ginger Amee Terdue
    Date: 4/17/2013 3:10:00 AM
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    Hi, Glad to read so beautiful a comment by you. just passing by but cant afford to ignore you. sorry if am that late. Anyway, this witty piece caught me off-guard and i was like: Yuk! You saw through my past! Not now anyway, thanks for the reminder.
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    Hashim Nizamani
    Date: 4/16/2013 8:46:00 PM
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    Find a way for friendshp, this poem may take the person far away whom u r talking with! Haha kidding... U seem angry through here!
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/16/2013 7:01:00 PM
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    People like that...augh.. What a great , powerful piece. Can relate. Bet many can. stay sweet Always, Laura
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    Kim Morrison
    Date: 4/16/2013 5:18:00 PM
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    I like this piece. It has a lot of emotion and is quite powerful.
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    Red OMara
    Date: 4/16/2013 12:08:00 AM
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    Lot of emotion there, Skat and angry at that. I've just found this poem and notice that it was posted 2days before I posted one of the same name. I'll change mine to Us. - Red
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