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YOU

YOU

Your 
Uncaring eyes
Push me 
Repulsively 
Braise me down to a pit of abysmal. 
Your balance ego 
Keeps me on the void
Tainting my walls
While I, 
Twitch
Bitter 
Words 
Of yuck
Behind your back.

~SKAT~

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  1. Date: 5/17/2014 11:26:00 PM
    Very well done...... Gina

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 3:29:00 AM
    Me you stew chew Bleeding exorcised Beautiful blue Red cauterised Tomorrow new Banished why’s Kaleidoscopic view Open wide eyes Me you hue mues

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 3:09:00 AM
    Glorious Dear friend...You are not only a good poet but also a great person . I love you so much ... Best wishes from India forever...

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 7:28:00 AM
    I know a few of your yous!...I like this poem very much, stirred quite a few bitter memories, and isn't that the aim of a poet, to stir emotions, good or bad?! Well done SKAT, Robert xoxoxo

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 3:13:00 AM
    Its so nice of Skat. Like it <3

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 9:38:00 PM
    Straight to the point... I like I like

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 3:10:00 AM
    DEEP !

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 10:29:00 AM
    † 'You,' Yes And I Do Not Know, If Anyone Has Ever Told 'You,' How Very Beautiful 'You Are;' I Am Sure A Million Times But, I Just Wanted To Remind, 'You.' ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 4:32:00 AM
    what a disgusting man here.. a great attitude, hope she leaves soon... Skaatt, love your words, i just havent got much time lately and some more, no computer :( thankfully i have my android to keep up with ur strong words (kiss and hug)

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Very nice. I love your use of words - "braise" "twitch" "bitter"

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Wow this is great. It reminds me of my first love. You wanted to know about me and to be honest I'm just a seventeen year old rebel without a cause who has slot on her mind haha but you're very talented. I love your work.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Very intense poem. Short yet not sweet. Paints the picture well, especially the ending.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Whoa, so raw and real. I love it. I can almost see the expression on your face as I read this. Great job.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 5:39:00 PM
    Hi, Skat. thanks for your many congrats this week. Waiting for some new poems from you!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:31:00 PM
    I love this poem SKAT, Excellent!!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Hey, an eye for an eye! He deserved it! :) I really liked this poem, SKAT! I would never let anyone treat me like that, and get away with it! Great work on this poem! :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:37:00 PM
    Wow, this is a really deep poem you have here, I love it! absolutely brilliant work here, SKAT! :) wish I could rate it higher :) favoring this indeed! :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 6:25:00 PM
    NOW THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT PIECE

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:12:00 AM
    woooooooo i dig it..YOU

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:21:00 AM
    I realy dig this. Blessed poetry.

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