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  1. Date: 2/11/2014 12:06:00 AM

    Loved this piece....your a really good writer and I love the title.... now Im singing it in my head ;) Wonderful write !! :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:59:00 PM

    I love this, awesome, Baby it's you reminded me of Smith group/girl ;} , Love john Lennon as well. awesome job on your Win ;} going to fav's ;} thank you for liking my Change of Season ;}

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 3:07:00 PM

    David, Beware, Each Acrostic Takes Longer, Every Song Submitted Eventually Leaves Fewer Titles Available, Even fewer By John, Paul, George and Ringo Paperback enjoyed without counting, Mike

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Hello David,.. Congratulations on your win :-) Tex

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Congrats David on this poem,... Nice one

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:22:00 PM

    Congratulations David, I knew this one was a winner xx

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:36:00 PM

    Well, after the Things We Said Today and Yesterday, I guess it's time to Get Back to an Octopus's Garden in my Yellow Submarine and Act Naturally. Congratulations from the Fool on the Hill!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:20:00 PM

    Another well deserved win David ....such a great way to do this...such imagination....Donna

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:26:00 AM

    WOW, DAVE! That took some thought! Way to put it all together! RAY

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:17:00 AM

    Hey David. Great win here!...masterful

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:43:00 AM

    Champion!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:18:00 PM

    !! Beautiful! Congratulations on a super win, David! Love, the song too! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:49:00 PM

    well done David, loved it was it a Hard Days Night when you wrote it...Ohhh that sounds rude, wasn't intentional ...Seren

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:01:00 PM

    Great write and win David...congrats

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:55:00 PM

    Congratulations

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:16:00 PM

    Wow........I thought I was a lover of all Beatle songs........but you have incoporated some I'd forgotten!! Love your poem!! Congratulations, David!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:10:00 PM

    I really really liked it but derned if I could sing Paperback writer to it LOl. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:24:00 PM

    Being a long time Beatles fan, this poem got me smiling from beginning to end. Loved picking out the titles. Very creative. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:49:00 PM

    David, like I said below, this is definitely the most creative take on the theme, I have to smile every time I read it and in reading it I can tell how much fun you had writing it---it shines through!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:14:00 PM

    David, I felt like I was playing a game of "Where's Waldo?" while reading this creative poem! I don't know how you managed to include so many Beatles titles in your verse and still make it flow so seamlessly! Superb job! Congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 6:02:00 PM

    Nice write touching.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 10:42:00 AM

    wow David a stellar write on these Beatle songs. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Impressive write!!!..another amazingwork from you dear David...enjoyed each line <3 :) thanks for sharing :) Sk

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:49:00 AM

    What a delight, it was fun to read and pick out the familiar titles! The Beatles put out so many good songs. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment on my poem.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 5:57:00 PM

    Oh, David, I Love the Beatles/ John Lennon, his b-day Oct. 9th, two days after mine,,,, And I love how you did this. Awesome. going to fav's ;}

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:27:00 PM

    Very cleverly done... sustaining a pleasing flow and superb rhyming. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith (PS the answer to the riddle is 'Freddy And Fredericka' by Mark Helprin.)

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:17:00 PM

    Very well done David. It's a lot of fun to review these titles. Nice work!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:35:00 AM

    AHHHHHHHH Dave my Beatle friend.. You know I'm loving this piece...

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:40:00 AM

    What an homage!!! My favs!! I love how you made it all Come Together. It must have been a Hard Days Night for you. These thoughts of Yesterday are so soothing to this Fool On The Hill. You Bad Boy, stirring an onslaught of Beatle music in my head. Honey Don't stop writing!! I Should Have Known Better. Reading your work is always so inspirational! Well done David!! I love it!! Cap'n deb ;)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:45:00 PM

    Ha...that's crazy, man. At first I didn't realize what you were doing here...but still thought it was an excellent poem. Then I realized you were doing Beatles titles...so well done, David.

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