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Frozen Tears


It’s so cold outside I can see my breath
So I exhale more forcefully than I need to
just to see the “smoke” coming from my mouth
I used to do that as a kid, thought it was so cool… (I still do)

Bundled up with coat and hat and gloves
Listening to the soft rock sounds that I love
Today instead of ear-buds, I used my big headphones
They keep my ears warmer when I walk in the cold

But my nose feels like an ice cube
as I briskly walk along this country road
And my face is getting numb
Otherwise, I’m not too awfully cold 

Only a little further… then I’ll be at home
standing in the steamy warmth of a hot shower
I can make it… just taking steps in time to the beat 
of the music which I love and practically devour

It’s late in the afternoon, it will be getting dark soon
The music takes me away as I walk along 
My thoughts are flying along with me, and I feel happy
And I probably look foolish singing out loud to the songs

But then, this always happens, somewhat unexpectedly
there are those songs that come along and I’m surprised
that they take me to a place of such deep emotion
Of some hidden feeling that was lost somewhere inside

And as a song begins playing, I feel tears coming
But I have to hold back, even if I want to cry
Or they'll freeze on my face (never a good thing)
I quickly use my soft glove to wipe my eyes

Sometimes I have this habit of looking down at my feet
It helps the time pass… it’s almost hypnotizing… 
As I watch them stepping in time to the beat
sometimes I finish my walk without even realizing

So on this day, I’m looking down at my feet 
Not paying much attention to my surroundings
And as I come around the curve near my home
I look up and see something quite astounding 

There beyond my house, looking to the west 
The most beautiful scene fills my eyes
Warms glows of yellows and oranges and reds
All splashed together like a painting in the sky 

It’s gift from heaven, this beautiful scene
I’m amazed at the feeling of peace that it brings 
It makes me feel all warm inside
And guess what I did
Yep… you know it.  I cried 


2/25/2013 

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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:18:00 AM

    sometimes simple things, more joy bring than anything,I love this one

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Good morning Becca.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:34:00 AM

    cool story, Becca....jg

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:41:00 PM

    I love this, Becca...especially the way you describe the little quirks and habits that we all have...and the ending?...'Yep...you know it. I cried' (too)- Tim

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:05:00 PM

    some times i look at long poems and just go to another one. but sometimes i start to read them and they drag me in. and some of them are so good they keep me the whole time. this was one of those times. i really enjoyed this. and the last line almost made me cry. great job john

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Becca, a special write, kept me through the whole thing because of the honesty of thought derived from--well--wonderful and pensive and beautiful experiences--really enjoyed.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 2:40:00 AM

    Sunsets are hard to capture on film...we never can appreciate them for what they instill in us in real time. You on the other hand...let us capture in your lines of Poetry...The brilliant writing Spirit you truly are...and why I'm so in Awe of you...I can't Speak for others...But how could anybody not fully agree!

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 2/28/2013 10:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Frank, If I was gay, but them I am a very happy person. LOL
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Thanks for your visit and comments today. As always you make my day.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:50:00 AM

    wonderful poetry Becca, this was so lovely to read, and a honour...

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:18:00 AM

    Becca, this is a beautiful poem, full of peace and tranquility, I too, love listening to music while walking along and I think I have seen that same sky, wonderful, well done, constance

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:30:00 AM

    I am seeing this poem now only,... this cool poem to go with the sunset pic:) Jag

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:14:00 PM

    Wow, you are inspired today. Great job! It sounds like an extrodinary winter day. ironic the code to submit my response is SUNY *lol* what are the chances?

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:45:00 PM

    This is an astonishingly beautiful write my friend! I truly love reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, so very lovely this poem really is, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:34:00 PM

    Bec firstly you have a great poem to go with that stunning pic, well done I love them...David