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Sweet Rapture

In a loving embrace, a moment in times was frozen
Etched in her mind as she wrapped loving arms around him
Drifting forever in his tranquil eyes, blue as the sea
His shallow breath fell upon her beautiful face
His grasp clutched and this pulled her heart strings
As arms entwined the lovers echoed a sigh
Passion, emotions floating on a  sea of bliss
Rejoicing in sweet rapture, they kiss.


25/2/13

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 12:08:00 AM

    I'm back to read this gem again, I see from below you won with it as well ;} you must have put it in the contest after I read it the first. I'm glad I came back so I could say congrats ;} I thank you for reading Lilith Invoking, she was Adams first wife ;}

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:20:00 PM

    PHYLLIS, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:25:00 AM

    love it, your amazing, God bless and love ya

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Ah Spring, I can't wait Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 3:12:00 PM

    ((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:15:00 PM

    congrats on your win Phyllis

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:40:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Phyllis!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:16:00 AM

    awwweee !! So romantic !!! I remember this...so many years ago. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:42:00 AM

    Congratulations :-)

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 12:00:00 AM

    Congratulations, Phyllis. Sweetly done. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:49:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest Phyllis, a beautiful entry

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Hey, Lady, just stopping by to say HI

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:25:00 PM

    ......."*.)? Sooo Sweet & Beautiful! ~ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:06:00 AM

    i really enjoyed reading this! loved it like crazy like the people love each other in this poem...carson

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:28:00 PM

    Phyl, such emotion, I just didn't know where you were taking me and am sort of glad it stopped at the kiss! Anything might have happened but that would have been great. You show such restraint my dear and do a fine write on romance.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:29:00 AM

    this is so beautiful, my friend

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:32:00 PM

    Ahh!! Excellent romantic touch..Enjoyed reading..It brightened my day..Sara

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:21:00 PM

    very nicely done Phyllis ;} thank you for reading my By The Sea ;}

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:48:00 PM

    yes, Phyllis, I can see what you mean about liking romantic poems. Just look what you have done here with this one!!! It's so lovely, my friend.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:15:00 PM

    what a beautiful write, Phyll - glad you're well and having fun with the grandchildren, my friend x

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Heart strings? Do they tie up like latches?

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:02:00 PM

    yes, the title of this one is well chosen because it describes a splendid rapturous moment!! Well done, my friend. And a big thanks to you for always supporting my FB page and my poetry. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:13:00 AM

    Phyllis, this is amazing, so romantic and full of deep love, the kind of love each person wants, love it, constance

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:02:00 PM

    This poem is gorgeous Phyllis, filled with such deep emotion and I love the way you penned your words in such great metaphors in between. Love, Gail