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Pale Moon Night

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Pale Moon Night

I will greet the dusk with eyes all pale
And wink at the waxing moon
A smile for the cool of night

I will walk alone this night
To reflect that grey pale
Sent down by loving moon

For it is her love...the moon
That turned me to the night
And to her silky pale

I walk a pale moon night

*For the tritina contest.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:39:00 PM
    Ok, the form sort of got me here-- was expecting a sestina-- but I see how it is a bit similar to it-- I have never tried a tritina though and I think you did wonderfully with this as well! There definitely is something about the moon that is mysterious and & intriguing-- very nice imagery here! love the last line! speaking of moon, I better sleep -- btw tropical yup-- I belong to the same islands as nette onclaud --

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Love how this poem flows Congrats for your win. SuZ

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:12:00 PM
    I never tried the tritina..i like the form..saw it on andy s blog too.You did a great job with it

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Another great win Caleb

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on a very fine win, Caleb! You're gifted!...that last line, ties this beauty all together. Always,Annalise

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:49:00 AM
    I knew this would be on the winners list! I still absolutely love the first three lines. Big congrats :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:33:00 PM
    CALEB, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Great win in Andrea’s contest Caleb, love the images!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on a winning spot once more Caleb xx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Caleb congrats on your win, very romantic write...David

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:55:00 AM
    Caleb congrats on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Love this Caleb!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:02:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this one. It was very atmospheric. THe moon inspires that in poetry! Congratulations for your win in my contest. Caleb.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:19:00 AM
    I love the moon-- it fascinates me too as it is a wonderful metaphor for so many things-- Yours is an excellent description of serenity. Mine.. "Blue Kiten Moon" was a bit more abstract, but I really had fun with it.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:31:00 PM
    I love this poem very much. A great write my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:23:00 AM
    Good work. Loved every line. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:20:00 AM
    I like the words you got up there, and thank you for reading Wasn't ME ;}

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Lovely and romantic. Wonderful work! I'm in love with the moon! :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Still a great entry....:-)