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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:39:00 PM
    Ok, the form sort of got me here-- was expecting a sestina-- but I see how it is a bit similar to it-- I have never tried a tritina though and I think you did wonderfully with this as well! There definitely is something about the moon that is mysterious and & intriguing-- very nice imagery here! love the last line! speaking of moon, I better sleep -- btw tropical yup-- I belong to the same islands as nette onclaud --

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Love how this poem flows Congrats for your win. SuZ

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:12:00 PM
    I never tried the tritina..i like the form..saw it on andy s blog too.You did a great job with it

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Another great win Caleb

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on a very fine win, Caleb! You're gifted!...that last line, ties this beauty all together. Always,Annalise

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:49:00 AM
    I knew this would be on the winners list! I still absolutely love the first three lines. Big congrats :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:33:00 PM
    CALEB, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Great win in Andrea’s contest Caleb, love the images!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on a winning spot once more Caleb xx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Caleb congrats on your win, very romantic write...David

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:55:00 AM
    Caleb congrats on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Love this Caleb!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:02:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this one. It was very atmospheric. THe moon inspires that in poetry! Congratulations for your win in my contest. Caleb.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:19:00 AM
    I love the moon-- it fascinates me too as it is a wonderful metaphor for so many things-- Yours is an excellent description of serenity. Mine.. "Blue Kiten Moon" was a bit more abstract, but I really had fun with it.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:31:00 PM
    I love this poem very much. A great write my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:23:00 AM
    Good work. Loved every line. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:20:00 AM
    I like the words you got up there, and thank you for reading Wasn't ME ;}

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Lovely and romantic. Wonderful work! I'm in love with the moon! :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Still a great entry....:-)