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With You

With you, I feel like I'm walking on air
With you, feels like I could sky dive
With you, no one else could compare
With you, just makes me feel so alive

With you, is something I've never felt
With you, is such a strong sensation                                                             
With you, I'm now totally blissed out
With you, is this feeling of elevation

With you, is where I always wanna be
With you, being in any time or space
With you, is a feeling of total ecstasy
With you, always makes my heart race

With you, makes me feel good inside
With you, happiness tastes so sweet
With you, being forever by my side
With you, makes me feel so complete


WRITTEN (2004) BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT
BASED ON A BREIF ENCOUTER AT TIME
Withyou I WAS TRYING TO DO THE SAME PATTERN AS
ILL BE and somnoe ect giving emphasis without
draging out so much  part two without you
written 2011 giving emphasis on oposite,,,,,,,,,,,,
Inspierd by events at these times







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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:32:00 PM

    wow...i like the feeling here David, i like the opposite feeling you gave this poem... awesome... xox~PD