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Moon Is My Muse

This celestial glory inspires Serenading nocturnal desires Illuminating earth with silver light In twilight's aftermath, a soothing sight. As glittering stars round her meander She smoulders with ethereal ardor Enticing the tides of oceans and seas Bringing the darkness of night on its knees. Her aura, divinely sensational Orbiting with pull gravitational Selene rides the night sky galvanizing Arousing dreams, her spark tantalizing. Her white luminous face exhilerates As quill emotes, my pulse accelerates.
Contest: Moon Is My Muse 25/02/2013

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:42:00 PM

    Tantalizing sonnet! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 4:50:00 PM

    Congrats Yasmin...wonderful win....Donna

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:36:00 AM

    A really deep and beautifully rhythmic poem! Congrats for your deserved win!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 1:26:00 PM

    Very expressive and descriptive work..Congrats on your big win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:31:00 AM

    Yasmin, super win with your sonnet!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:35:00 AM

    Yasmin, congratulations on your well deserved win in the Moon is My Muse contest. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 5:08:00 PM

    Lovely sonnet. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Yasmin, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Oh yes indeed...Another compelling and and passionate gem from the blooming, fragrant Jasmine...Never get tired of your poetry...Congratulations on another well-deserved win - Tim

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:57:00 AM

    I neede google translate for big words u have here, but the meaning are amazing. Congrats on the big win, Ysssie :)

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:31:00 AM

    Congratulations on your top placing in Russell's contest. RAY

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:02:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin on your wonderful poem. A well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:00:00 AM

    it is a monolith in space, but i'm with heather, love that last quatrain.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:23:00 AM

    Fantastic adjectives to describe the moon...scientific and uber-rific! I bet this one will be on top! :) Thanks for your bday wishes! Today is the big dinner! :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:52:00 AM

    Oh, this sonnet is so gorgeous! I especially love lines 9-12. You are awesome!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Yasmin, this is a lovely Sonnet for the contest, best of luck, constance

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:39:00 AM

    Very nicely done Yasmin. Best wishes in the contes. Warm Smiles, Connie

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:54:00 PM

    I got lazy and did a monoku...like yours much better..love the last line. BG

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:54:00 AM

    Yas, outstanding piece of work...David

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Very beautiful ..sounds like a winning poem to me

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:22:00 AM

    What an exquisite poem, I think even the muse of poetry jealous would be of this divine verse! Highest of possible marks!