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Kiss the Rain

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Kiss the Rain

I stand here by the lakeshore, and I smell fresh honeysuckle as I kiss the rain. A memory that I cannot curtail wafts bitter sweetly to me, and again it’s May. . . the night you came to me by moonlight. The air was permeated by perfume from blossoms colored innocently white. But now it’s summer; yellow is each bloom. When plump upon the vines, sweet berries, red, will be swooped up by birds and carried away. I stoop to touch a stem. How soon has fled my flowered youth, and now this day chilled grey, I bow in downpour like the vines bent low while raindrops turn to tears and - glistening - flow. For the Contest of Gail Doyle

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Nice romantic sonnet. Congrats on your win. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 2:36:00 PM

    Congratulations Andrea, on your seventh place win with this wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Ingriuing sonnet. and this seven line verse is a new challenge. Cheers!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:41:00 AM

    U drew me into two romantic seasonal moments...I don't know which one I like more, the scent of honeysuckle with moonlight, or being swept away by birds at summer...G R E A T S C E N E S! Good luck with this contest.

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 3/1/2013 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ooops....congrats on this contest! Hey! :)
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:33:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Gail liked this one, and so do I.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 5:54:00 PM

    Congratulations overdue on this one. Beautiful sonnet

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Very much enjoyed your words

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:06:00 PM

    love this awesome sonnet, my friend - you're Soup's queen of sonnets for sure : )

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:24:00 AM

    Amazing sonnet dear Andrea. Simply love the beauty of your poetry. And yes Congratulations are in order!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:01:00 AM

    Congrats on the placement, Andrea...though I thought it would be ranked higher...it's really good

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:16:00 PM

    Andrea, congratulations in Gail's "Kiss The Rain" contest. always~ PD

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:09:00 PM

    I love the imagery you brought me there! Congrats

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:10:00 PM

    Your loveliness does show, congrats on your special win Andrea, xxx

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:47:00 PM

    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Beautiful! Colors again... You're very good with rhyme, something I simply cannot do. My old brain just doesn't work that way, I guess. J

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 6:49:00 AM

    Beautiful, heart-rending sonnet, by the master - or is it mistress - sonneteer. (no such word) I remain your eternal fan. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:26:00 PM

    great write Andrea, memory's I can not curtail ;} thank s for reading Myth and Monsters. ,, how about fall from Grace or wild strawberries ? I guess I will have to go thru them all. Thank you for reading.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:15:00 PM

    Great job with the theme. It really got my imagination going. Perfect descriptions!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:14:00 PM

    Hola, Andrea your poem is lovely, with a sad hint that will return every year... a pretty kissing the rain poem.. always~ PD

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:41:00 PM

    a beautiful write Andrea...winning wishes

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:05:00 PM

    a sad but lovely poem. ~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:40:00 PM

    This poem glows radiantly and with feeling. I know I've said this more than once in different ways, but I can really feel nature breathing in your poetry. And also, I have seen The Hours, and that poem was actually inspired by it. Perceptive. Looking forward to coming back again, Andrea. Best, Jeremy

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:16:00 PM

    Mercy me, Andrea...You hurt me so sweetly...

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:45:00 PM

    I am sure it is a win!! You write so beautifully!!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:39:00 PM

    This so so beautifil. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 3:08:00 PM

    Absolutely beautiful

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:21:00 PM

    Lovely picture. From my perspective your youth has not fleed, still lovely to behold. Have a great day

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Andrea second stanza forth line, Should it read "How soon (time) has fled? Very visual and like always flows smoothly. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/25/2013 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the sentence continues to the next line, Connie. how soon has fled my youth!
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:43:00 AM

    Oh Andrea...this touched my heart and soul...such depth of feelings. Lovely write...lovely!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:39:00 AM

    This is very lovely and sprinkled with sadness...I think it's wonderful!

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