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We Danced in the Kitchen

Hearts mangled by grief
Lost in separate mazes...
Cooking a half-hearted meal
A turn of the head, a quick glance
Trembling hands reach out...
A slow jitterbug shuffle
to sweet soul sounds on the radio...
We danced in the kitchen

Then hold-your-baby-so-tight
Hold-your-baby-so-tight-crying-song
Swaying to Harold Melvin and the Bluenotes
'If you don't know me by now'...
Tear-soaked necks and shouders
Melting into each other
Melting and blending into one...
We danced in the kitchen

Oh how we danced
How we danced to the moon
How we danced to the dawn
How we danced in the kitchen

Sweet Jesus let it be so
Let it be so again
Let the music play on
Let us dance one last song
Let us waltz one last waltz
Let us dance in the kitchen...

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 3:46:00 AM

    Toby you're just scooping up the wins!! Lol !! Well Done!! This one is music to my soul...hold on to your dance card. ;) *tear* big congrats!! Love, Dolly

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 10:36:00 AM

    "Let us dance in the kitchen" << I really love this theme you got going on here. You don't wish for a big fancy dance club or ballroom... all you want is too have a little spark in the more mundane places (like in a kitchen)... what does it matter anyhow if it's with the one you love? Awesome piece!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 12:30:00 AM

    great win..I would love to have you in my kitchen...its boring sometimes..only cooking and washing dishes..am asking you for a dance TImmy?

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in PDs contest Tim I love this one

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:32:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Tim, smashing write xx

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:49:00 PM

    Tim, ;-) congratulations with your sweet and awesome win, in my any poem goes contest. Good Night~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:21:00 PM

    great write and win Tim.....dancing is good therapy for the soul...

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 5:58:00 PM

    Awesome Tim, I love the repetition the hook line as music people say--great poem or even lyrics!!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:01:00 PM

    Nothing can break the trance of grief or trouble like an old familiar tune. There are a couple that take me to this place...this is just awesome..

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:48:00 AM

    mmm I love this, tear-soaked... so beautiful.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:00:00 PM

    :) this is so lomvely and romantic.. dear Tim..enjoyed your brilliant talent , very nice sharing <3 Sk

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:41:00 PM

    This is romance at its height my friend, purely a wondrous dancing waltz! I loved reading this fantastic poem this evening! What a powerful piece that you have so eloquently written, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:22:00 PM

    Yes Tim, this is so romantic! It doesn't say romance, it sings romance. A wonderful write you have penned, I enjoyed the read and dance~ Caryl

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:20:00 PM

    This is so romantic Tim. You have a way of putting your words into a song where only the heart can dance to. Just beautiful. Luv, Gail