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The Mountain

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The Mountain

Howling wind, blinding snow
We climb
Face is stinging
A patch of ice
Slipping
Grasping
Up again
Moving
Getting a grip
With hands and feet
Crawling

I see the top
Almost there

Standing tall

"Let's go papa"

Sliding back down
With my sherpa granddaughter

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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:19:00 PM

    You painted a great scene of adventure. Very well done. Congratulaions on being featured poem of the week :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Rick, I like this awesome write. Congrats, on having your poem featured on the soups home page. Have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 8:29:00 AM

    Good morning Rick, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week. enjoy life with smiles :-) love <3 LINDA

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:51:00 PM

    adorable

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:15:00 PM

    Rick, a heartfelt poem 'take care~SKAT