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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:50:00 PM

    very touching.just visiting some new poems today and came across this one.good job.take care

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:27:00 PM

    David,, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 1:37:00 PM

    Yeah David, I still remember this great sestina of yours... Congrats on another win.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:18:00 AM

    Very touching, indeed... Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, David. This is one of my favs too.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:18:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this beautifully written poem David!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:44:00 PM

    Oh My God, so full of sadness, yet so well deserved to win. Congrats. Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:10:00 PM

    This evokes such sadness and memories. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 4:18:00 PM

    Congratulations, David! :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 3:10:00 PM

    a good but sad verse. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 1:33:00 PM

    Wow! This is hardcore. J

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:40:00 AM

    Reading and commenting on this once again make me happy and especially seeing it on the grand winners' list one more time makes me rejoice! Big warm congratulations for your grand win my dear friend David! Thanks again for sharing! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:33:00 AM

    many congratulations on your double win David , first as a fave and now this xx

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:02:00 AM

    very touching...congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 2:34:00 AM

    Congrats, David, nice one:) Jag

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:33:00 AM

    Congrats. David lovely poem...Seren

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 3:13:00 PM

    wow got a poem like this one too. how we miss the departed souls

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 5:14:00 PM

    A lot of emotional depth here. A poem well worth reading. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 10:47:00 AM

    this one is a beautiful yet sad write. a heartfelt story in a perfect poetic work, David.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:24:00 AM

    Wow I definitely have missed out on quality poems in my absence. David another special poem

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:02:00 AM

    Hi David, the problem with being not around is how much quality poetry i miss and this is sheer magic,,so amazing the poem and to end it with that last line,, i'm sure if it had been on stage, you'd would had many many curtain calls, i dont have many going to fav anymore, but this as just got to be an exception,, it has totally blown me away...

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 4:13:00 PM

    Oh, David, this is so very special! It is definitely one for my List of Favs. Congratulations on your awesome win! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:23:00 PM

    Congratulations David on a very heart stirring win...Donna

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Excellent and very touching piece,David...Great write....Congrats on your super win...Nice going,pal....

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Beautiful and touching write, David. FAVing it! Congrats on your 1st place. Love, Su

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 11:52:00 AM

    Touching write bro...big congrats on your win. Hugs

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:37:00 AM

    David, this is so powerful and moving! You write as if you have been using this form all your life. Wonderful job. Big congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:28:00 AM

    A lovely write. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:25:00 AM

    David, excellent win with this moving poem!