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green boughs

green boughs bounce and dance

    annimatedly jumping

          - wind whistles a tune

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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:18:00 AM

    this goes right with your own contest theme!!!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 1:38:00 PM

    Wonderful haiku and I could see those branches swaying in the wind. Thank you for my placement in the contest. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:29:00 AM

    Excellent!!!! Hey you should check out a young poet name Margherita Russo

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 5:16:00 AM

    Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:35:00 PM

    Hi Francine, such a visual poem; brings to mind the pine boughs in winter as they move in the winter wind. Lovely imagery in your words. Tim came by to nudge me his blog and I saw your comment and felt so humbled you would think my writing worthy of such praise. Thank you, that will be with me always! Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:12:00 PM

    thats what there doing right now

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:21:00 PM

    Good to read your animated work today..Sara

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:35:00 PM

    There is so much joy in this one....lovely!! Makes me happy! Thank you for that!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:10:00 PM

    Francine very good...David

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:50:00 PM

    ‡ Returning Unto This Festive Joyful Verse In Splendours Swayful Breeze, Sweet Beautiful Francine! ˜ As To Thank Your Lovely Beauty And Priceless The Warmth Within Your Kind Visit; 'Purely Beautiful!' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Awesome haiku! Love it. Rick

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:25:00 AM

    Lovely haiku Francine xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 12:02:00 PM

    Francine very good...David

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:17:00 PM

    superb haiku-ing, Francine!! I just loved the assonance AND alliteration of those two words: boughs and bounce!!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:08:00 PM

    Great haiku, Francine! I can picture this so clearly. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:04:00 PM

    Dear Francine ..... it is GORGEOUS! - Good luck in the contest, hope you win. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:55:00 PM

    A visual flow in your Haiku. Well done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:34:00 PM

    .................................. ‡ Thank You, Sweet Beautiful Francine ˜ Joy Be Your Beauty's Visit; Truly ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel * Ps., Have A Very Beautiful Day &, Sweet Kisses. *

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:09:00 PM

    ‡ Sooo Romantic, Sweet Beautiful Francine ˜ I Bet Those Winds Would Be The Whispers, In Beautiful Love ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *