Ellen

A girl i desire
an ancient flame rekindled
sincere warmth impaled,
there the whole day perfection
a place i ne'er want to leave.

© Harry j Horsman 2013

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bl devnath Date: 3/6/2013 9:48:00 AM It's call romance of romance, sweetly worded the honey truth. Thanks for all the comments. Loved always,bl
Sara Kendrick Date: 3/6/2013 7:31:00 AM Ahhh!!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
elizabeth wesley Date: 3/1/2013 7:39:00 PM Sounds comfortable and full of joy; haven't heard the name Ellen for a long time, brings back memories of someone I knew. Lovely as always Harry! :)
Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/1/2013 10:59:00 AM an ancient flame rekindled..i love these words you used to describe this reviving passion..lovely
Debbie Duncan Date: 2/27/2013 9:48:00 AM nicely done harry ;}
Annalise Brigham Date: 2/26/2013 12:35:00 PM : ) Beautiful thoughts that warm any heart, Harry. Always, Annalise
Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/26/2013 7:23:00 AM Tell me more, sounds like an intresting story Harry.
Caleb Smith Date: 2/25/2013 1:57:00 PM Love that middle line!...nice tanka, harry
Sukmawati Komala Date: 2/24/2013 10:16:00 PM this is so amazing my fav poet Harry..so lovely and fabulous poem,, enjoyed so very much my dearest friend <3 <3 <3 much luv and hugs :)
Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 7:17:00 PM The whole day perfection...doesn't get better than that..lovely
Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/24/2013 5:43:00 PM a woman and a place in memory. So nice, Harry. Ellen is my sister's middle name. pretty name!
Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/24/2013 2:13:00 PM Dear Harry, that's the spirit! There is still a lot of fire! we have a lot of things to show to the younger generation. Beautiful poem, real and touching!
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/24/2013 1:16:00 PM Do not leave ..... - Like it, Harry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Eileen Ghali Date: 2/24/2013 1:06:00 PM My dear Harry...check your last line! You are missing a V in the word never! ;) I need to give this Ellen a good talking to and tell her to shape up and let you back into her life because you ROCK! :)