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no longer to mourn for contest

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no longer to mourn for contest

I am a painted doll with a mean looking face
I prey on your mind of love there’s no trace
An hour glass in hand I tell you it’s time
When the sands run down your time to die
You ask me, why is it me, why am I to die
I say it’s because you are sad you do not try
Your always write sad rhymes no joy in your life
Better you die no longer to mourn
Better off dead should never been born
She spies the spindle ready to strike
Grabbed it and killed me
The lone reaper no more, 
                  this time, I die.


24/02/2013

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:31:00 PM

    The poem is good, but is it for real. Get those thoughts out of your head it's not your time yet. Cheer up - we love you. Lucilla

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dont worry Lucinda its just a poem......Seren
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 12:07:00 PM

    Seren this can't be you per se, I like it a lot as dark as it is, what contest is it for?....and good luck...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    objectify or a name like that , Gave 3 items to write about David... Did what I could with it ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:05:00 AM

    ooooh this is good like it xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Mandy, ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:54:00 PM

    When I read this I almost feel lke it's my time to go. Nice work Seren, it is intense.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Wayland ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:29:00 AM

    This is such a sad write, but written very well my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell ....Seren