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He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

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He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

I sit among a field of springtime clover

Honeybees gathering sweet nectar as they hover

I'm daydreaming of last night's encounter

Right here on this fragrant carpet of green and white

Were the kisses real?

Was the moon that bright?

I pull petals from a daisy, one after the other

Chanting, he loves me, he loves me not, my lover

Here among a field of springtime clover

2-24-2013. ©Donna Jones


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  1. Date: 5/12/2013 9:28:00 AM

    Oooh the old lover's pastime. This was really sweet and sincere, Donna... very enjoyable to read. I know this is off topic, but I'm reminded of a Far Side Comic. It showed two giant flowers picking up a human... in the caption it said "Okay now WE are going to play She-loves-she-loves-me-not". Gary Larson's imagination is so bizarre! Lol...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/12/2013 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh thanks Timothy....sounds like a funny guy....:-)
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 12:48:00 PM

    Terrific write and win! Hugs

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/11/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Cecilia :-) appreciate you reading my poem...
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:17:00 PM

    Another wonderful win Donna, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/10/2013 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda but I do so look forward to your next poem..or they should be called something else...magical words to the masses maybe.... anyway thanks...I feel like I'm in kindergarten and you are the teacher. Thank you for the comments at all...donna
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Ah Spring, I remember eating clover LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/9/2013 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Debbie
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 3:22:00 PM

    ((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/9/2013 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Sara ....blessings
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:20:00 PM

    wonderful write and win...congrats

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/9/2013 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Joseph :-)
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Donna!Congrats on the win.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/8/2013 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kash ...appreciate it....
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:07:00 AM

    I love this one..good work and congrats Do9nna. BG

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/8/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Barbara...
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:49:00 AM

    Awwweee... just love the romantic feeling in this !! Wonderful !! Congratulations on your win !!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/8/2013 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So glad you liked it Debra ..
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:43:00 PM

    How delightful. Congratulations, Donna. Love, Joyce

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/8/2013 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Joyce....
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:40:00 PM

    lovely entry Donna, congrats on your win in my contest

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/8/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for having us Francine...it was my pleasure....
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:31:00 PM

    A very sweet poem. I like it very much. J

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/1/2013 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you enjoyed Jack...one I hope everyone can relate to in one way or the other....blessings
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:04:00 PM

    Oh yes, they were real--else you would be sitting in thorns

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/1/2013 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ouch!!!!!!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:46:00 AM

    It's always the next day when payment is due.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/27/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yep......:-)
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:55:00 AM

    Has the world lost out on the belief in Daisys and 4 Leaf Clovers? I think not, but there are areas of our society who have indeed lost the joy of these and other "fairy tales" and we as a society pay dearly for this loss. I like this poem, too, and reminds me of a day I sat on the front lawn of Andrew Jacksons home near Nashville with my twin sons 7 years old, and found no less than 14-4 leaf clovers. 23 years later and life is still wonderful. Another good poem from you.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/26/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    How wonderful. 14! Wow...I have one pressed in a book and pulling petals from daisies was a common past time for small girls where I grew up...small town charms...wouldn't trade them for the world
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:38:00 PM

    wonderful poetry Donna, you take one there, to the very heart of your words..

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 5:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks harry. Much appreciated...blessings
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:42:00 PM

    this is very sweet. Is it for the green contest? if so, a lovely entry.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea. I entered it in the spring love one...do you think it better for the green one? Thanks for stopping ..
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:34:00 AM

    Donna great entree for the contest, good luck...David

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David much appreciated!
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:09:00 AM

    hover and clover love the pattern here such emotional also in so little words xx davidscott

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That means a lot to me David after all love is a big word all by itself...I appreciate your kind words
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:32:00 AM

    Beautiful and tender as the Spring!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A compliment from you Demetrios brings a smile all its own...thanks
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:51:00 AM

    Ahh!!Enjoyed reading this fantasy or not work this morning..It was captiviting indeed.....The romance and suspense was uplifting this morn ..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am so glad you enjoyed reading my poem and I hope all goes well for you. Blessings
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:56:00 PM

    What a delightful tale you have told. I hope your daisy has an odd number of petals!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by my poem Richard...me too..
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:30:00 PM

    A beautiful verse you have penned, Donna. I enjoyed the read very much, I love it~ Caryl

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/25/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Caryl so much for the kind words and for stopping to read my poem
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:27:00 PM

    Nice write here..tender...Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie, I appreciate it
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:11:00 PM

    Donna, this is very sweet ...... I'm sure "he love you." - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks...you have a great week...:-)
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:35:00 PM

    Donna the visual flow of your poem is outstanding. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I so appreciate the support Connie...smiles...
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:16:00 AM

    OH....HOW DELIGHTFUL, DONNA! How absolutely lovely....I wish I could be int hat field instead of here sick in bed with the flu! I LOVED it! Hugs! BTW...thanks for your post on my poem, Edit, Edit, Edit! Sweet of you, as always!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked the poem but most of all you get well dearest........sending prayers and Lysol....
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:59:00 AM

    Awesome! This is a tremendous and wondrous write my friend! You have completely put me in awe with this delightful poem this morning! What a loving piece, quite the spectacular poem, Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/24/2013 4:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    As always the kind heart...thanks Russell....you make every one feel needed and important...you are kind :-) :-) :-) :-)