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Wasn't ME

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Wasn't ME

I'm not the person you think me to be.
I do vial and disgusting things.

Where nobody else can see.
As the public sees me, I'm good.

 I'm not the person you think me to be.
For you see, I'm the great manipulator.

That you never dream is me.
I'm sweet as candy around you.

But in reality I do things you just can't see.
Though I'm a pillar of the community.

Because that's all I allow you to see.
Goodness and light is all you think of me.    

Until that is, until,  you catch me. 
And still, I will say,  It wasn't me.


 11/ 28/ 2010  I was watching American Greed Scams and listening to a helicopter circling as they were looking for someone .

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  1. Date: 12/23/2013 1:04:00 AM

    Just can't seem to find a poem to comment to that is a new one for me, and I was also noticing that you have not posted one for a long time, Gosh, I sure hope you write one soon. Maybe one for Chrstmas!!!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:24:00 PM

    The context of this is very funny. I don't think you could ever be like those TV characters. Stacy Keach has a great narrator's voice don't you think? Wishing you nothing but all that is good! Enjoy every day!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:39:00 AM

    Lol, you put that into a context, then it's clear. It put you in that frame of mind :) Funny toward the end, Debbie. I like it.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:37:00 PM

    We all tend to portray a different persona when in the public eye or around friends. Deep poem, causes me to reflect upon myself.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:44:00 AM

    Thought provoking ;-)...DEEP write..thank you ;-)

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:51:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:21:00 PM

    thought proving write, my friend

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:30:00 AM

    Debbie - It wasn't me either, but I know it wasn't you. The bad can't do what you do. I like the poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 2:06:00 PM

    I enjoyed your verse this afternoon. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:43:00 PM

    Very honest and deep Debbie. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:43:00 AM

    Wow, I love this! Such an honest and intriguing write. Very well done!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:25:00 AM

    That's the you I'd like to meet.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:40:00 AM

    Love the honesty of this verse, with a sense of mischief there at the end. Interesting. (: Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:44:00 PM

    - .............. You are a dear friend in my eyes Debbie! - A good poem. - Have a lovely day, hope the sun will shine on you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:47:00 AM

    So true of some people in all walks of life..Enjoyed reading today..A topic that fits the times..Sara

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Oh, I like this one...very cool!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:11:00 AM

    Debbie, I once wrote a personification of Greed. This reminded me of that one. I enjoyed seeing your new post today!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:23:00 PM

    ??? This one makes me think...very intriguing