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triped

today I saw
a dog
he was missing a leg

suddenly 
like out of the blue
a tear was hobbling

his infirmity
has reminded to me 
how much ...

you are missing 
to myself  

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Gitlan, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 7:59:00 AM

    This just baffled me, a dog missing a leg, just as you miss her? Such powerful imagination...sarcasm...sarcasm... Think about it.

    George Avatar Gitlan George Date: 3/21/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you man!!!
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 4:35:00 AM

    Nicely done. Cheers. Rick

    George Avatar Gitlan George Date: 3/18/2013 5:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Rick!!!
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:31:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poem and your message.

    George Avatar Gitlan George Date: 2/24/2013 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks John Wulf!!!