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He Loved

He loved
his sisters and nephews and nieces
his friends, his enemies and Skittles
Neil Young and Hendrix and Dylan
LSU, the Astros, the Saints
crab boils and back-yard basketball
running the roads with his buddies...

Yes he loved
many things and hated very few
Like sitting up late and talking
about good music and bad movies
about prancing, primping pre-madonnas
about good and evil and wrong and right
about God, the Universe and human folly
about the why and when and what and where
with insight that defied his young years
as if he knew...

Oh yes he loved
trying anything he never tried
trying, almost desperately trying
to cram a whole lifetime
into twenty-one years...

Oh how he loved, oh how he laughed
Oh how he sparkled and shined...

Yet there was that faint tint of sadness,
a tiny shake of the head, a far-off look
as if he knew...


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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 7:07:00 AM

    I just love this poem. Those final lines are really loaded. Great poem.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:39:00 AM

    Great write..there..beautiful :-)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:41:00 PM

    Good work! Congrats on your win Tim!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:48:00 PM

    This is a fantastic write, Tim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:13:00 AM

    Amazing write... To the point and very powerfully written... I read it twice.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:03:00 AM

    Powerful Tim and true of so many!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 3:17:00 AM

    A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:36:00 PM

    Tim, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:23:00 PM

    Wonderful write Tim exquiste Cher, & there's no time like the present to go back to college? Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 4:18:00 AM

    I am crying with you Tim.so heart breaking..I want to know what happened..

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:56:00 AM

    A beautiful and a sweet poem Tim :)

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 9:29:00 PM

    oh Tim. this is so sad... sorry if this is a real experience for you, I can't imagine. You know... we should all love this much, like this guy! and try to live as much as we can... none of us really know how long we have. Such a beautiful sweet poem.... hugs <3

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:47:00 PM

    Tim this is a wonderful but heart wrenching poem..read it twice..reads like a eulogy. Lovely...sorry if it is a real loss in your life....donna

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:55:00 PM

    Ahh!! Very expressive and emotive work.. A twist to the end that is unexpected..Enjoyed reading this one today...I hope that the signs of spring come to you soon..I like the long thin lines of the Cranes..I like the caws of the crows..The Great Blues silent floating in...I have never seen an Eagle in real life that must be a magnificent sight..We see the Ring Tail Hawk here..They are a beauty in flight..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Wow Tim, this is very deep. As deep as it gets my friend. Very touching. Thanks for sharing your poem. Also, thank you for commenting on my poem Battling Addiction. You are hero for overcoming an addiction. God bless. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 3:18:00 PM

    Ahhh....wow......this hits me with such emotion and heartache....how much like my own sons, twists my heart into a knot. I can feel how deeply this pain must be, one that will never go away. I do hope sharing it can help to cushion it gently.....little by little. :)