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comatose

once upon a night, I dreamed a dream that I often thought went beyond of what I deemed would come true, but came to naught. an uneasy slumber gave no reprieve, as I tossed, turned to drowse I did badly crave eyelids flickered open, yearned for bliss of oblivion attained in night's dormancy a quiescent soul shaken by somnolent truancy.
24/02/2013

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:34:00 AM

    Comatosed.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:54:00 AM

    Oh, yes my friend, yes indeed...I can surely identify...'somnolent truancy'...perfect - Tim

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:25:00 AM

    A deep poem Yasmin! beautiful.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:39:00 PM

    Again you have written a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 5:25:00 PM

    Wow, what a tremendously wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! You sure leave me in awe with your masterful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:05:00 PM

    Yasmin, you do everything with style! - Wishing you a wonderful weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)