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Kiss The Rain

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Kiss The Rain

                KISS THE RAIN
(anguish of a flood survivor)
                            
Distinguish,I can't,between raindrops and tears,
For my face now is a tragedy,carved out by demons .
Do the rains try to soothe, or amplify my fears,
and mock my existence,full of sarcastic puns?
They swayed away,to rhythms of nature,
with rains oiling the wet inferno.
The flood engulfing all beseechers,
wrestling for life,but ending with K.O.
It's me who survives, to tell you the tale,
pale be my face,caressed by the rain.
The armada of dear ones,lifeless they sail,
soaking the rain, the seed of this bane.
Insane now I grow,when I think of days,
when my skin was tickled,by tears of clouds.
But providence failed,as they cried on my face,
and washed away my kin,with me covered in shroud.
Thou kiss the rain,and hail the elation,
your pardon I implore,for it's you I envy.
No peace in my life, a rainy fiction,
with silence before  tempest,then silence eternally.

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  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:20:00 PM
    You are very talented, I look forward to reading more of your work.

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir...
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 4:27:00 PM
    this is a very poetic write. Welcome to Soup.

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot ma'am
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Excellent. Meaningful and powerful phrasing. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir...
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 5:06:00 PM
    This is awesome Adarsh ;} fav's some poets make me so jealous ;},,,, glad you liked my MASSACRE ;} have a great day .

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by and reading my works..Have a good day.
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 1:48:00 PM
    you are too deep for words, enjoyed xxx

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot...
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:41:00 AM
    An excellent piece, full of graphic imagery and powerful phrasing. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my poetry, sir....
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:31:00 AM
    wow! with silence eternally. Adarsh, a deep poem, my favorite line... my face now is a tragedy,carved out by demons ........... i am feeling the pun we are... enjoyed your poem... LInda

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my poetry, Ma'am
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:58:00 AM
    I can feel the flow of emotion in this work..Sorry to hear of your loss..That had to be a traumatic event..It is good that you could write about it..Thanks for stopping by.Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You feel my poem, tht's the biggest reward I could get... Thank you ma'am