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Green Revolution



Green is my favorite color,
The color of a beautiful nature,
Looking at the lovely green fields ,
My soul really wants your shields .

Trees all around me,
Everywhere I see,
Celebrating a great day,
For us to be happy.

The coolness I feel,
My eye shed a tear,
Hearing the sound of crickets, 
Hiding under the rice fields.

Green grasses proudly showing,
Green frogs merrily croaking,
To the world of wonderful creation,
Thanks God for this green revolution. 


Mother earth is smiling, 
Because of our nice living,
People plant trees and help to clean,
It's now all looks refreshing...so green…


February 23, 2013
For Sandy's Contest "Go Green"
Honorable Mention



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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:39:00 PM

    Congrats, Maria. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:17:00 PM

    Maria, Congratulations with your wonderful winning poem in Sandy's contest~ always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:04:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win in the Green contest, may Spring come early for you. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 8:23:00 AM

    This is a superb write my dearest friend! I love it and the very beautiful and very refreshing image you've portrait here. An excellent write indeed! A winner for me! Good luck and best wishes always! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:49:00 AM

    Enjoyed your work and will read more of yours... xxx Michael

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:22:00 AM

    I wanted to : - Running barefoot in the green fresh grass on a gorgeous summer day .... - A very good poem Maria! - Good luck in the contest! - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:40:00 AM

    this is an excellent entry for the green contest. I love that color and you did it justice!!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:07:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..It would be good if we could all plant a little something every year in our yard to help the planet earth become a better place..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 2:27:00 PM

    ‡ Kind Of Rem In That The Garden Called Eden, Sweet Beautiful Precious Maria ˜ Always Loving Your Enchanting As Beautiful Voice And Very Lovely Your Precious Heart's Shedding Perhaps A Tear In Joy, While Listening Unto The Happy Jimmy Crickets Chirping Away And Yesss, 'Our Loving Heavenly Father,' His Incomprehendable As Indiscribable Beauties In Creation! ˜ Thank You For Your Own Priceless Beauty's Kind Warm Visit ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:38:00 PM

    love this beauty, my friend - congrats on all your wins too : )

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Maria I like this a lot, it is fresh and bouncy...David