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Reflection on our beginning

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Reflection on our beginning

It was instant this connection
Never saw your face for you were far away
But still my heart skipped a beat
Intrigued by your persona, your aura 

I quizzed you trying to decide why I felt these feelings
I could tell you could tell I was invested
Way before my confession my true feels apparent 
I’m attracted to you; think I am in love with you

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  1. Date: 3/26/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Oooo..I really love the sound of this...real smooth!!

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 3/26/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's how it felt when it was happening.
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Abigale I love this write of yours it just drips romance and intrigue, well done...David

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 2/23/2013 7:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment David. It was.
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Aw shucks... thank you my dear Abigail! LOL Oh you didn't mean me! So sad... :{ A beautiful romantic piece sweet lady! Hugs, Jack

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 2/23/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack it's for everyone so it's for you too.