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The curse of the face-book

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The curse of the face-book

The course of Face-book 

On her birthday she received 
Flowers, 
Cards,  
Gifts,  
Cakes, with candles on and
Readymade Phrases 
Her room was empty and 
No friends rang, they had
Like: 
Flowers,
Cards,
Gifts, 
And cakes with candles on 
Gone virtual.
 

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:08:00 AM
    don't feel anything - forgot to type my all important name. Guess the card could have been from anyone, or maybe a slip of the finger. Some times the computer will give you a reminder and an automatic happy birithday with feeling will be sent.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 5:57:00 AM
    so true and to me, so sad!

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 2/23/2013 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you iLene
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 5:56:00 AM
    Insightful and topical, I can feel the warmth from those candles

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 2/23/2013 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you raskin