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Kiss the rain

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Kiss the rain

Feeling tired
Your body stressed
Mind a tumbling
Dont know whats best
Look out the window
Another damp day
Put on some shoes
It is time to lay ..
Those tears at bay

Look up look up
Feel  my touch
Thats what the  rain
Is saying to you
Lift up your face
Let my touch heal
Destress your soul
Make you whole ..
Tears gone away 

Your aches fade away
Your body feels limp
The stress is abating
A small smile appears
The rain is so cool
Don't want it to stop
You lick at your lips
Quenching your love ..
Tears of hope now

Those magic raindrops
Work for you
Making life lighter
Easier to cope
Smiling again
Dimples on show
Life is worth living
Full of hope ...
Tears of joy now

All thanks to those fine raindrops, healing from above.



22/02/2013

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  1. Date: 2/24/2013 2:07:00 PM
    You really are a very versatile writer. I think really you're crafty like Jack. I enjoyed the poem very much, but then again, I find something that I enjoy in most of them.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/25/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Wayland I try to be different ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:29:00 AM
    Love the rain, love the poem , love your words... hugs Michael....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww thanks Michael, hugssss ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:29:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..One thing for sure the rain of late would wake one up for it is cold water..Thanks for stopping by..If this is for a contest, it reads like a winner to me..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Same here Sara, the weather is so cold ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Seren an awesome write. I love your take on this prompt of healing rain. Best wishes on the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/24/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Connie, thanks for stopping b y....Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Star there is something wonderful about just standing in the rain and getting soaked, not all the time though, I like this a lot, have a great weekend...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/23/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Diolch Dafydd, yes rain in small doses really is great. You too have a great weekend, just watching Wales beating Italy at rugby, making me smile.
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 2:01:00 AM
    Hi Seren wonderful just loved this take on healing rain, have a great weekend my friend, all the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/23/2013 3:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Owen, I love the fine rain.. have a fab weekend and role on summer, even summer rain ...seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:33:00 AM
    This is a truly tremendous and entertaining write my friend! I am enthralled by the beauty you exude within this wonderful poem! What a powerfully heartfelt piece your have described here Seren! Such a delight to read this evening! Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/23/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Russell glad you enjoyed my pem, have a brill weekend. ..Seren