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Losing you

You were but a fleeting moment to calm my insanity      Bridging the gap of conciousness to outright calamity      Behind eyes of sorrow      False words of tomorrow      From ruby red lips      Twisted sounds       Shaking      Trembling the grounds     Beneath me       Lies and deceit     Masked by vows of love      Causing little doubt      Within becomes without      The air in my lungs      Needed to shout      To scream      Shake me      Awaken me      From this nightmare      This endless dream      Of yesterdays visions      Of closed eyes     Blinded by my fears      Of losing you

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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:35:00 PM

    Hi Richard, . your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! losing someone close, can open a can of all the emotions above... Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

    ferry Avatar richard ferry Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You seem to be always there with an encouraging comment...thanks rick
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:03:00 AM

    Richard I like this a lot and the format works very well...David