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Deep in the Woods

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Deep in the Woods

Deep in the woods, a cottage lies,
deep in the core of it,
and gazing out with empty eyes,
twins by a window sit.

Deep in their thoughts, they sit, these two,
above their shack, a shroud
of limbs from trees block any view
of sun, or moon or cloud.

Deep in their hearts, they had to know
they shared a secret sin.
In dark, sweet flowers cannot grow
when jealousy creeps in.

Deep in the night, the cold winds gust.
The leaves from a fresh dirt mound.
The winds, as strong as two maids’ lust,
now move the leaves around.

Deep in the ground, lies one who came
by chance.  He did no wrong
but put twin virgin hearts aflame. . . 
then stay a bit too long.

Deep into sleep, each woman dreams
of the love she yearns for still
and shivers to recall the screams
of the man both had to kill.


For PD's Contest (boy that filled up fast!!!!)

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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Hi Andrea, I Loved this one. I always like a little mystery. I Love the way you crafted this piece. From start to finish it just flows along at a steady pace. The pictures you paint on your canvas come so easily to the front of the mind. This is writing at its best. You crafted your piece in such a way that the reader can use their own imagination in parts. All in all, a most enjoyable read. Have a good day. Catch you later.Your Friend....MIKE. Got to speed along while this things working.

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Leaves so much to the imagination - and that's where all the spooks live. You do this sort of thing brilliantly. Really brilliantly. - Red

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Chilling tale m'lady. The fact that you did not explain the "why" in their murdering some random person makes it all the more intriguing. I find terror doesn't stick with you if you don't have some mystery involved. You seem to have similar views... thanks for the read!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 10:55:00 AM

    A deep mystery of what happened in the woods. lol Nicely written love phyl

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:32:00 PM

    I wasn't expecting that twist at the end....deep and delicious! Hugs p.s. took your advice and wrote a poem : )

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 6:41:00 AM

    Wow! A deep woods mystery. Why did they have to kill the man? Was it for love? You always kill the man you love. Isn't that a song? Yes, in my perverted mind, I seem to recall the tune. I enjoyed this mysterious opus, dear Andrea. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:48:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win Andy luv xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserve win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Special AD and ready to be scripted for TV--congrats!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:07:00 AM

    I see this one was in a contest...congrats...I didn't even see this contest...must have been up fast!...oh, btw, 'The Binding' was my first poem on the soup. I remember because I entered it into a first poem on the soup contest.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:14:00 PM

    This is a stunning write which I enjoyed reading my dearest friend Andrea! A scary one which is, as always very creatively crafted by one of my most fav. poets. I like it so much! My biggest congratulations in all your 3/more consecutive fantastic wins. By the way, I would like to answer now about my ex Adonis. His picture was already torn into pieces;) and that poem Tell Him was really for him ;) Thank you so much for asking.;) Have a great day in sunshine! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:50:00 PM

    Hi Andrea... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 8:54:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:49:00 PM

    WOW, awesome Andrea, This has to win ;} going to fav's

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:18:00 AM

    Great approach for the dark poem contest!Love this Andrea.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:48:00 PM

    This is dark and melodious...I love it!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Terrifying... and tantalizing !!! reminded me of Poe's poems!!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:40:00 PM

    Scary, my hairs on my arms stood up. An awesome write Andrea. It sounds like a win. I'm an identical twin myself-Connie Irene and Bonnie Jean. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:13:00 PM

    wow, just love this creepy one!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:11:00 AM

    i didn't even see this contest, but if this isn't at the top of the list, i'd be shocked! you totally nailed this poem - it feels like it was written many many years ago (when poetry was truly cherished!). fantastic!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:08:00 AM

    Andrea an excellent write and vivid picture, great entree, hope your weekend is going ok...David

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:42:00 AM

    Excellent. Very interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:38:00 AM

    STUNNING!! To my Favs

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:31:00 AM

    Hi Andrea great write for the contest yet again young lady, really enjoyed, have a good weekend my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:06:00 AM

    Very intriguing, Andrea, and this is poetry done with finesse, excellent:) Jag

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:56:00 PM

    A cool poem, Andrea, twists are always fun for me to read. And of course, very well-written as is expected from you(yes, it is expected! lol).

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 7:36:00 PM

    This is an inviting write, a delightfully dark poem! I loved the last stanza especially, this is a masterfully written piece Andrea! What a deep, dark, and awesome poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:53:00 PM

    You have me shaking in my boots Andrea, wait, let me get the popcorn be right back lol xxx