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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Oh my........ such pain one can't imagine. I feel it deeply.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:10:00 PM
    very good write on an all too sad subject ;}

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:37:00 AM
    Sad..... beautifully.. :-)

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:59:00 PM
    A sad one but a very well written tribute for him!!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:16:00 PM
    Happy Birthday Baby Bam, your memeory lives on forever through you Cuz Scribe, so sorry, god bless you , peace debra

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 2:27:00 PM
    O mercy me Marlon...I am so have expressed your grief so very well...'blew out his candles' tells me he met a violent death too??...if so, I hope the bastard who did it got his due...I can identify well with this!! - Tim

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:58:00 AM
    very sad condolences for your loss....

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Wow, breaks your heart Scribe--God Bless

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:35:00 AM
    RIP BABY BAM...too young, sad. Your cuz will be with you always in your heart. Sorry for your loss Scribe. God Bless, Connie

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:38:00 PM
    A sad poem Scribe, sorry to hear about your loss... my heart goes out to you, on this day. God bless, always LINDA

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 8:30:00 PM
    So sorry...blessings

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Beautiful and sad. Some may go, but they will leave prints in your heart forever. Thankst for sharing. By the way - Paquito means Francisco, or Frank. poquito is - a little bit. I know you'll get better. It just takes a little time. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Good Homage Scribe - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:01:00 AM
    So beautiful but so sad, Marlon! - Always in your heart! <3 - Have a nice weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:57:00 PM
    That seems way to young to die, Nice to read your poetry again Marlon xxx