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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Large, majestic words can make for a powerful poem but they can also distract from the story, if there is one. If this poem was spoken in a deep booming voice it would have the listeners eyes glazed in awe. But to ask them what it meant to them would create a different glaze and a response that would try to emulate the words that were said. Reading this poem was like watching a large tree being blown by the wind. I was in awe of it's size and strength but lost in the message of it's leaves.

    Pritts Avatar Rockman Pritts Date: 3/5/2013 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    With all of the being said, what I'm really trying to say is that the poem sounded great. But I just don't know what it means. Is there a way that you can clarify the subject in terms that I can understand and read it in a different light?